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May 8, 2020

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Internet Lynching

According to news, a Japanese woman in her 20's were commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell. She enjoyed barbecue and golf with her friends in her hometown. After viral infections was found out, she still took a bus to come back to her room in Tokyo.
Now she's got an internet lynching. Her friends posted the high school graduation album to show her face to others. Also, she turned to be a patissier. Then, a cafe which people on an SNS suppose it is her workplace got a reputational damage. Actually this cafe is not her workplace, yet the cafe gets many complaint calls everyday.
I think this intnernet lynch to this young woman is too much and the cafe is quite miserable.
I think people who have plenty of time to waste prefer focusing on such a thing.
Meanwhile, yesterday I saw some packs of unused toilet pepar rolls dumped on the trash collection area of the next apartment. Now that every supermarket started to sell tolet papers last week as before. Apartment rooms in Tokyo are smaller than big cities from other countries so there's no space to keep many packs of toilet papers. I think that's why they dump those toilet papers.
I wonder if some of those who dumped there unused toilet papers join the people twittering about this young woman. Because those who have bad manners are acting rudely everywhere to others and they pretened to be nice. I think they tend to have a sense of justice by picking on people weaker than them.
I hope this young woman doesn't get a real lynch by others who just want to remove their frustration.


ニュースによると、20代の日本人女性が味覚と嗅覚に異常を感じていたにもかかわらず、毎日通勤し、実家にバスで帰っり、実家に買えるとバーベキューやゴルフを友人達と遊び、コロナ感染が発覚した後もバスに乗って東京に戻っていたそうだ。
今、この女性はネット私刑を受けています。彼女の友人達が高校の卒業アルバムを投稿し、顔を公に晒したのです。またパティシエであることが判明し、SNS上でその女性の勤務先と思われるカフェが風評被害に遭いました。実はこのカフェはこの女性の勤務先ではありませんが、毎日クレームの電話が多数入っているそうです。
私は、この若い女性に対するネット私刑は行き過ぎと思いますし、カフェは本当にかわいそうだと思います。 暇な時間がたくさんある人はこのようなことに没頭するのが好きなんでしょうね。
一方で、私は昨日、未使用のトイレットペーパーが隣のマンションのゴミ置き場に捨てられているのを見ました。
先週から、どこのスーパーもトイレットペーパーを以前のように売っています。 東京のマンションは海外の都市部のマンションより部屋が小さいので、たくさんのトイレットペーパーを保管するスペースがありません。それで彼らはトイレットペーパーを捨てたのではと思います。
そして思いました。この未使用のトイレットペーパーを捨てた方の何人かは、この若い女性についてツィートしている連中に加わっているのではないかと。 マナーが悪い人たちは、どこに行っても他人に対する態度が悪い上にいい人ぶるからです。思うに、自分より立場の弱い人々をいじめることで正義感を味わおうとするのではと。
私はこの若い女性が、自分の欲求不満解消をしたいだけの人達に、実際にひどい目に遭わされないことを願います。

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Internet Lynching

According to news, a Japanese woman in her 20's were commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell.

According to news, a Japanese woman in her 20's wereas commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell.

This means that the place smelt and tasted weird. Is that what you meant? If you meant that her sense of taste and smell was weird, replace “the” with “her”. I don’t really understand what you mean either way, if I’m honest!

She enjoyed barbecue and golf with her friends in her hometown.

After viral infections was found outere discovered, she still took a bus to come back to her room in Tokyo.

This means that she continued to travel when there were several cases of the virus detected in Japan (or even in the whole world).

Now she's got an internet lynching.

Her friends posted the high school graduation album to show her face to others.

Also, she turned to be a patissier.

Then, a cafe which people on an SNS suppose it is her workplace got a reputational damage.

Actually this cafe is not her workplace, yet the cafe gets many complaint calls everyday.

I think this intnernet lynch to this young woman is too much and the cafe is quite miserable.

I think people who have plenty of time to waste prefer focusing on such a thing.

Meanwhile, yesterday I saw some packs of unused toilet pepar rollsaper dumped on the trash collection area of the next apartment.

Now that every supermarket started to sell tolet papers last week as before.

Now that every supermarket started to sell toilet papers last week as before.

Apartment rooms in Tokyo are smaller than big cities from other countries so there's no space to keep many packs of toilet papers.

I think that's why they dumped thoseat toilet papers.

Or “are dumping toilet paper”, if you mean people generally rather than the specific case you saw.

I wonder if some of those who dumped theire unused toilet papers join the people twittering about this young woman.

If you mean using the website Twitter, you should use the verb “tweeting”. Twittering is fine if you mean gossiping or stupidly saying a lot of useless stuff that no one cares about.

Because those who have bad manners are acting rudely everywhere to others and they pretened to be nice.

I think they tend to have a sense of justice by picking on people weaker than them.

I hope this young woman doesn't get a real lynch by others who just want to remove their frustration.

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I don’t really know what “Lynching” is (I don’t think I’ve seen the word before, although it does look vaguely familiar) but I think I have a good idea of what you mean by it here. It’s probably just that I don’t know the word, but you might want to confirm that it’s correct, if you’re unsure, since I can’t tell you certainly!

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Tamochan

May 10, 2020

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Thank you so much for modifying! I checked "lynching" on the internet. I'm glad you had a good idea of what I wanted to say.

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Tamochan

May 10, 2020

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According to news, a Japanese woman in her 20's wereas commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell.

This means that the place smelt and tasted weird. Is that what you meant? If you meant that her sense of taste and smell was weird, replace “the” with “her”. I don’t really understand what you mean either way, if I’m honest!

Yes I wanted to say her sense of taste and smell was weird or got strange due to the coronavirus.

According to the news, a Japanese woman in her 20's wereas commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell.

After viral infections wasere found out, she still took a bus to come back to her room in Tokyo.

Also, she turned out to be a patissier.

Then, a cafe, which people on an SNS suppose it is her workplace, got a reputational damage.

Meanwhile, yesterday I saw some packs of unused toilet pepaaper rolls dumped oin the trash collection area of the next apartment.

I wonder if some of those who dumped theire unused toilet papers join the people twittering about this young woman.

Because those who have bad manners are acting rudely everywhere to others and they pretened to be nice.

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Tamochan

May 10, 2020

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Thank you so much for modifying!

I hope this young woman doesn't get a real lynching by others who just want to remove their frustration.

Or you could write "I hope this woman doesn't actually get lynched by others who want to remove their frustration."

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You picked the right term, lynching. Very well done!

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Tamochan

May 14, 2020

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Thank you so much for telling that!!

Internet Lynching

According to news, a Japanese woman in her 20's were commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell.

According to the news, a Japanese woman in her 20's wereas commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell.

According to news, a Japanese woman in her 20's wereas commuting everyday and went to her parents' home by bus despite of the abnormal sense of taste and smell.

She enjoyed barbecue and golf with her friends in her hometown.

After viral infections was found out, she still took a bus to come back to her room in Tokyo.

After viral infections wasere found out, she still took a bus to come back to her room in Tokyo.

After viral infections was found outere discovered, she still took a bus to come back to her room in Tokyo.

Now she's got an internet lynching.

Her friends posted the high school graduation album to show her face to others.

Also, she turned to be a patissier.

Also, she turned out to be a patissier.

Then, a cafe which people on an SNS suppose it is her workplace got a reputational damage.

Then, a cafe, which people on an SNS suppose it is her workplace, got a reputational damage.

Then, a cafe which people on an SNS suppose it is her workplace got a reputational damage.

Actually this cafe is not her workplace, yet the cafe gets many complaint calls everyday.

I think this intnernet lynch to this young woman is too much and the cafe is quite miserable.

I think people who have plenty of time to waste prefer focusing on such a thing.

Meanwhile, yesterday I saw some packs of unused toilet pepar rolls dumped on the trash collection area of the next apartment.

Meanwhile, yesterday I saw some packs of unused toilet pepaaper rolls dumped oin the trash collection area of the next apartment.

Meanwhile, yesterday I saw some packs of unused toilet pepar rollsaper dumped on the trash collection area of the next apartment.

Now that every supermarket started to sell tolet papers last week as before.

Now that every supermarket started to sell toilet papers last week as before.

Apartment rooms in Tokyo are smaller than big cities from other countries so there's no space to keep many packs of toilet papers.

Apartment rooms in Tokyo are smaller than big cities from other countries so there's no space to keep many packs of toilet papers.

I think that's why they dump those toilet papers.

I think that's why they dumped thoseat toilet papers.

I wonder if some of those who dumped there unused toilet papers join the people twittering about this young woman.

I wonder if some of those who dumped theire unused toilet papers join the people twittering about this young woman.

I wonder if some of those who dumped theire unused toilet papers join the people twittering about this young woman.

Because those who have bad manners are acting rudely everywhere to others and they pretened to be nice.

Because those who have bad manners are acting rudely everywhere to others and they pretened to be nice.

I hope this young woman doesn't get a real lynch by others who just want to remove their frustration.

I hope this young woman doesn't get a real lynching by others who just want to remove their frustration.

I think they tend to have a sense of justice by picking on people weaker than them.

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