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Ducky

Jan. 11, 2022

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I Don't Believe in the New Year's Resolutions.

I never have made New Year's resolutions, because I don't believe a lot in it. When I have a need, then I make a goal o resolution. Never mind the year's day in which I begin the new activity. For instance, in october, I thought I had must to lose a couple of kilograms, so the next day I started to walk three kilometres every day. Today, three months ago that I follow doing this stroll, and I have succeeded that that is an habit for me. I know, walk 3 km for day is not a great target, but is realistic for me. If I had thought to do eight km, surely I would have begun to do it some days only, but I would end up leaving it.

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I Don't Believe in the New Year's Resolutions.

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I never hahave never made New Year's resolutions, because I don't believe a lot in itin them much.

When I have a need, then I makeI set a goal or make a resolution.

Never mind the year'sThe day ion which I begin the new activity doesn't matter.

For instance, in oOctober, I thought I had must tobetter lose a couple of kilograms, so the next day I started to walk three kilometres every day.

Today, Now it has been three months ago that I follow dohave been taking this daily stroll, and I have succeeded that thatin making ist an habit for me.

I know, walking 3 km foper day is not a great target, but it is realistic for me.

If I had thought to do eight 8km, surely I would have begun to dogradually begun only doing it on some days only, but, and then I would end up leagiving itup.

When I have a need, theno, I make a goal or resolution.

Never mind the year's day in which I begin the new activity.

Most native speakers don't know the difference between "Nevermind" and "Never mind" (with a space.) I, myself don't know the difference lol.

For instance, in october, I thought I had must to lose a couple of kilograms, so the next day I started to walk three kilometres every day.

Today, three months ago that I follow doing thishree years ago today, since I started to take daily strolls, and I have succeeded that thatin making ist an habit for me.

I know, walking 3 km fora day is not a greatn ambitious target, but is realistic for me.

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Overall, pretty good! :)

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Ducky

Jan. 12, 2022

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Thanks.

I Don't Believe in the New Year's Resolutions.

I Don't Believe in the New Year's Resolutions.

I never have made New Year's resolutions, because I don't believe a lot in it.

I never hahave never made New Year's resolutions, because I don't believe a lot in itin them much.

When I have a need, then I make a goal o resolution.

When I have a need, theno, I make a goal or resolution.

When I have a need, then I makeI set a goal or make a resolution.

Never mind the year's day in which I begin the new activity.

Never mind the year's day in which I begin the new activity.

Never mind the year'sThe day ion which I begin the new activity doesn't matter.

For instance, in october, I thought I had must to lose a couple of kilograms, so the next day I started to walk three kilometres every day.

For instance, in october, I thought I had must to lose a couple of kilograms, so the next day I started to walk three kilometres every day.

For instance, in oOctober, I thought I had must tobetter lose a couple of kilograms, so the next day I started to walk three kilometres every day.

Today, three months ago that I follow doing this stroll, and I have succeeded that that is an habit for me.

Today, three months ago that I follow doing thishree years ago today, since I started to take daily strolls, and I have succeeded that thatin making ist an habit for me.

Today, Now it has been three months ago that I follow dohave been taking this daily stroll, and I have succeeded that thatin making ist an habit for me.

I know, walk 3 km for day is not a great target, but is realistic for me.

I know, walking 3 km fora day is not a greatn ambitious target, but is realistic for me.

I know, walking 3 km foper day is not a great target, but it is realistic for me.

If I had thought to do eight km, surely I would have begun to do it some days only, but I would end up leaving it.

If I had thought to do eight 8km, surely I would have begun to dogradually begun only doing it on some days only, but, and then I would end up leagiving itup.

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