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laryssalz

Jan. 20, 2022

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How I study English

I try to study languages every day.
I create a daily schedule with online apps. Although I'm realistic about the time, but procrastination is my main enemy, and I don't use pay thing, for example, private teachers, it´s affected my development, result: my writing and speaking, are not good. This website will help me a lot with the writing, here seems great for free users. And, the obvious, read a lot, because specialists say "if you read, you have good writing"
I will improve my speaking, by recording audios and free English clubs for speaking.
I hope to someday be fluent in English.


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How I study English

I try to study languages every day.

I created a daily schedule with online apps.

If you do this regularly your sentence may be correct, but I'm assuming you've made your schedule already and are now following it, so past tense is better.

Although I'm realistic about the time, but procrastination is my main enemy, and I. I also don't use pay thingid services, for example, private teachers, and it´s affected my development,. The result: my writing and speaking, are not good.

"Although" or "but" are redundant together so sound weird, you just need one or the other.

This sentence had a lot of different ideas connected by commas, which made it hard to follow. I think multiple short sentence work better.

This website will help me a lot with the writing, hereit seems great for free users.

And, the obvious, read a lot, because specialists say "if you read, you will have good writing."

I will improve my speaking, by recording audios and attending free English clubs for speaking.

"Audio" and "free English clubs" are both nouns, so the original sentence means "recording audio" and "recording free English clubs". This sounds strange because audio is generic while the clubs are specific, so it's strange to list them both. But if you put another verb in there it turns it into two seperate activities, which is fine.

I hope to someday be fluent in English.

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Thank you for sharing you language learning strategies! I hope to be fluent in two languages one day too.

How I study English

I try to study languages every day.

I create a daily schedule with online apps.

Although I'm realistic about the time, but procrastination is my main enemy, and I. I also don't use pay thing, for example,id resources, such as private teachers, it´. This has affected my development, and as a result:, my writing and speaking, skills are not good.

Where you use 'although', you don't need to use 'but' and vice versa :)

This website will help me a lot with the writing, here seems great forand it is great that it is free -to-users.

And, the obvious,Obviously, I will also try to read a lot, because specialists say "ifthe more you read, you have goodthe better you writing"e".

Try not to start a sentence with 'and'.

I will improve my speaking, by recording audios and clips and joining free English clubs for speaking.

I hope to someday be fluent in English.

How I study English

I try to study languages every day.

I create a daily schedule with online apps.

I created a daily schedule with online apps.

Although I'm realistic about the time, but procrastination is my main enemy, and I don't use pay thing, for example, private teachers, it´s affected my development, result: my writing and speaking, are not good.

Although I'm realistic about the time, but procrastination is my main enemy, and I. I also don't use pay thing, for example,id resources, such as private teachers, it´. This has affected my development, and as a result:, my writing and speaking, skills are not good.

Although I'm realistic about the time, but procrastination is my main enemy, and I. I also don't use pay thingid services, for example, private teachers, and it´s affected my development,. The result: my writing and speaking, are not good.

This website will help me a lot with the writing, here seems great for free users.

This website will help me a lot with the writing, here seems great forand it is great that it is free -to-users.

This website will help me a lot with the writing, hereit seems great for free users.

And, the obvious, read a lot, because specialists say "if you read, you have good writing"

And, the obvious,Obviously, I will also try to read a lot, because specialists say "ifthe more you read, you have goodthe better you writing"e".

And, the obvious, read a lot, because specialists say "if you read, you will have good writing."

I will improve my speaking, by recording audios and free English clubs for speaking.

I will improve my speaking, by recording audios and clips and joining free English clubs for speaking.

I will improve my speaking, by recording audios and attending free English clubs for speaking.

I hope to someday be fluent in English.

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