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akihello

June 28, 2021

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Horoscopes…?

"Do you believe in horoscopes?"

I have an app of horoscopes and I like reading reports of it.
The app is called Sun Signs by horoscope.com.
At first, I tried to practice my English reading skills with it.
I think I don't believe in horoscopes so much, but I barely believe what Sun Signs said sometimes.

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"Do you believe in horoscopes?

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I have an app of horoscopes app and I like reading reports ofn it.

The original wording felt awkward, this correction is a more natural way to say it.

The app is called Sun Signs by horoscope.com.

At first, I tried to practice my English reading skills with it.

I don't think I don't believe in horoscopes so much, but I bareoccasionally believe what Sun Signs said sometimeys.

The grammar is awkward and is a little difficult to understand. This way sounds much more natural.

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Very nice overall

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akihello

June 30, 2021

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I don't think I don't believe in horoscopes so much, but I bareoccasionally believe what Sun Signs said sometimeys.

The grammar is awkward and is a little difficult to understand. This way sounds much more natural.

Oh, "occasionally" !

I don't know much about the word ("occasionally"), and I don't seem to be used to it. I'll note it. Thank you for the corrections.

Horoscopes…?

"Do you believe in horoscopes?

"

I have an app of horoscopes and I like reading reports of it.

I have an app of horoscopes app and I like reading reports ofn it.

The app is called Sun Signs by horoscope.com.

At first, I tried to practice my English reading skills with it.

I think I don't believe in horoscopes so much, but I barely believe what Sun Signs said sometimes.

I don't think I don't believe in horoscopes so much, but I bareoccasionally believe what Sun Signs said sometimeys.

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