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Hong Kong joke~

It was through the experience of competitions, lectures and clubs that I successfully obtained an internship in an accounting company at the end of my freshman summer vacation. Here, I officially experienced the daily life of the "working emperor" in Hong Kong. With the recommendation of my colleagues, I learned a lot of restaurants that only local people in Hong Kong know, and what apps are necessary in Hong Kong (such as my observatory), Sometimes my colleagues will make some local jokes with me, such as "slowly but quickly" to illustrate Hong Kong's high efficiency and high pressure.

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Hong Kong joke~

Hong Kong Joke
Comment: probably better with all capitals; no need for the swing-dash at the end

It was through the experience of competitions, lectures and clubs that I successfully obtained an internship in an accounting company at the end of my freshman summer vacation.

Here, I officially experienced the daily life of the "working emperor" in Hong Kong.

With the recommendation of my colleagues, I learned a lot ofmuch about restaurants that only local people in Hong Kong know, and what apps are necessary in Hong Kong (such as "my observatory),"). Sometimes, my colleagues will make some local jokes with me, such as "slowly but quickly", to illustrate Hong Kong's high efficiency and high pressure.

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Hong Kong joke~

Hong Kong joke~

It was through the experience of competitions, lectures and clubs that I successfully obtained an internship in an accounting company at the end of my freshman summer vacation.

Here, I officially experienced the daily life of the "working emperor" in Hong Kong.

With the recommendation of my colleagues, I learned a lot of restaurants that only local people in Hong Kong know, and what apps are necessary in Hong Kong (such as my observatory), Sometimes my colleagues will make some local jokes with me, such as "slowly but quickly" to illustrate Hong Kong's high efficiency and high pressure.

With the recommendation of my colleagues, I learned a lot ofmuch about restaurants that only local people in Hong Kong know, and what apps are necessary in Hong Kong (such as "my observatory),"). Sometimes, my colleagues will make some local jokes with me, such as "slowly but quickly", to illustrate Hong Kong's high efficiency and high pressure.

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