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insik

July 31, 2021

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Hiking with my son

I usually go hiking with my son once a week. My son is seventeen years old and busy studying during week days. He has little chance to exercise. So our hiking is a good way to take care of our health. Today, while we were hiking we talked about some things that he is interested in. When we stay at home it’s difficult to find time to talk but when we are in the mountain we naturally get to talk to each other. It’s a shame that we don’t have time like ths more often.

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Hiking with my son

I usually go hiking with my son once a week.

My son is seventeen years old and busy studying during week days.

He also has little chance to exercise.

So our hiking is a good way to take care of our health.

Today, while we were hiking we talked about some things that he is interested in.

When we stay at home it’s difficult to find time to talk but when we are in the mountain we naturally get to talk to each other.

It’s a shame that we don’t have time like this more often.

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wonderful. I'm happy you had a nice time with your son.

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insik

Aug. 1, 2021

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Thank you for your kind feedback!

Hiking with my son

I usually go hiking with my son once a week.

My son is seventeen years old and. He is busy studying during the week days.

HAs a result, he has little chance to exercise.

So our hHiking is a good way to take care of our health.

Today, while we were hiking we talked about some of the things that he is interested in while hiking.

When we stay at home iIt’s difficult to find the time to talk bwhile we are at home. But when we are in the mountains, we naturally gethave the opportunity to talk to each other.

It’s a shame that we don’t have time like thcan't do this more often.

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insik

Aug. 1, 2021

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Thanks for your kind correction!

Hiking with my son

I usually go hiking with my son once a week.

My son is seventeen years old and busy studying during week days.

My son is seventeen years old and. He is busy studying during the week days.

He has little chance to exercise.

HAs a result, he has little chance to exercise.

He also has little chance to exercise.

So our hiking is a good way to take care of our health.

So our hHiking is a good way to take care of our health.

Today, while we were hiking we talked about some things that he is interested in.

Today, while we were hiking we talked about some of the things that he is interested in while hiking.

When we stay at home it’s difficult to find time to talk but when we are in the mountain we naturally get to talk to each other.

When we stay at home iIt’s difficult to find the time to talk bwhile we are at home. But when we are in the mountains, we naturally gethave the opportunity to talk to each other.

It’s a shame that we don’t have time like ths more often.

It’s a shame that we don’t have time like thcan't do this more often.

It’s a shame that we don’t have time like this more often.

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