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ponta

March 31, 2021

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Full Bloom

Today, cherry blossoms in my town had reached full bloom. It's the first time since 1953, the start of the observation, to be in full bloom in March. The temperature has also become hotter. I'm finally feeling spring comes.

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Today, cherry blossoms in my town had reached full bloom.

It's the first time since 1953, the start of the observation, tohey've been in full bloom in March.

The temperature has also become hotter.

I'm finally feeling that spring comes.

Alternative:
"I'm finally feeling spring's arrival."
"I'm finally feeling that spring is here."

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Lovely!

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ponta

April 1, 2021

217

Thank you!

I'm finally feeling spring comes.

I don't think that this sounds very natural. You could try any of the following.
"I'm finally feeling that spring has come"
"I'm finally feeling that spring is coming"
"Finally, I'm feeling ... "

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ponta

April 1, 2021

217

Thank you for your suggestions!

Full Bloom

Today, cherry blossoms in my town had reached full bloom.

Today, cherry blossoms in my town had reached full bloom.

It's the first time since 1953, the start of the observation, to be in full bloom in March.

It's the first time since 1953, the start of the observation, tohey've been in full bloom in March.

The temperature has also become hotter.

I'm finally feeling spring comes.

I'm finally feeling spring comes.

I'm finally feeling that spring comes.

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