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Kist

Sept. 8, 2022

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Five years from now, I will be.

This kind of topic sometimes makes me feel so thoughtful, because I would like to be so many things. I wish in five years I would overcome a lot of the fears I have today. Among the list of things I would like to be better is in my English spoken skills, but more than be better I want to be confidence. I have learned that even having everything you want, with no confidence people would not make so many decisions in their life.
Personally, I have to work a lot in my personality and myself control meaning my emotions. Let your thoughts control you in many cases is so counterproductive. Other times, stress can be helpful but that is not my case.
So, getting back to how I will be like to be in five years, it would be being self confident and less shy. To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will, you need more than that.
I see myself secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.
Living in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keep pushing to have my house in Puerto Rico and moving forward to the job a want. Most of all I see myself being able to help my family financially. Having stuff just for me means nothing if I can not help my loved ones.

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Five years from now, I will be...

Since this is not a complete sentence, you can't end it with a period.

This kind of topic sometimes makes me feel so thoughtful, because I would like to be so many things.

I wishhope that in five years I wouldill have overcome a lot of the fears I have today.

Among the list of things I would like to be better is in my English spoken skills, but more than beimprove in is speaking English. More than just being better at it, I want to be confidencet.

I have learned that even havingif one has everything youthey want, with no confidence people would not, they hesitate when makeing so many decisions in their life.

Personally, I have to work a lot ion my personality and myself control meanling my emotions.

Letting your thoughts control you is, in many cases is so, counterproductive.

Other times, stress can be helpful, but that is not true in my case.

So, getting back to how I willould be like to be in five years, itI would be beinglike to be self confident and less shy.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will,can be achieved with just willpower; you need more than that.

I see myself secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.

LI see myself living in a better place and having a better lifestyle,. I keep pushing to have mya house in Puerto Rico and moving forward toget the job aI want.

Most of all, I see myself being able to help my family financially.

Having stuff just for me means nothing if I can not help my loved ones.

Five years from nNow, I will be.

This kind of topic sometimes makes me feel so thoughtful, because I would like to be so many things.

I wish in five years, I wouldish to have overcome a lot of the fears I have today.

Among the list of things I would like to be better is in myn/at is spoken English spoken skills, but more than be betterthat, I want to be confidencet.

I have learned that even having everything you want, with no confidence people would cannot make so manya lot of decisions in their lifeves.

Personally, I have to work a lot in my personality and myself controlling myself, meaning my emotions.

Letting your thoughts control you in many cases is so counterproductive.

So, getting back to how I will beould like to be in five years, it would be being selfgaining more confidentce and being less shy.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will, sometimes you need more than that.

I see myself secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.

Living in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keep pushing to have my house in Puerto Rico and moving forward to thea job aI want.

Most of all I see myself being able to help my family financially.

Having stuff just for me means nothing if I can not help my loved ones.

Five years from now, I will be...

This kind of topic sometimes makes me feel so thoughtful, because I would like to be so many things.

I wish that in five years I would have overcome a lot of the fears I have today.

This is sort of like saying "[When five years have passed,] I wish that I would have..." like you expect it to be true when it's done.
Another way of saying it is "[In the next five years] I wish I can overcome..." like you hope it will be true and are going to work towards doing it.

Among the list of things I would like to be better is in my English spokeneaking skills, but more than be betterthat I want to be confidencet.

I have learned that even having everything you want, with if people had no confidence peoplethey would not be able to make so many decisions in their life.

I think this is what you meant, please correct me if I'm wrong

Personally, I have to work a lot ion my personalitycharacter and my self -control meaning. In other words, my emotions.

Even this correction sounds a little awkward, but it's the closest to what you originally said.
It might sound more natural to say something like "Personally, I have to work a lot on my character and my self-control when it comes to my emotions."

Letting your thoughts control you in many cases is so counterproductive.

Other times, stress can be helpful, but that is not true in my case.

Other ways of saying this include "but that is not true for me" and "but that is not so in my case."

So, getting back to how I willant to be like to be in five years, it would be beingmore self confident and less shy.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will, y. You need more than [just] that.

If in formal writing, you could also use a semi-colon ; between "will" and "you" as in "not everything is done by will; you need more than that."

I see myself being secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.,

I would combine this sentence and the following one

Lliving in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keepcontinuing to pushing to have my house in Puerto Rico, and moving forward to the job aI want.

Most of all, I see myself being able to help my family financially.

You could also move "financially" so that it becomes "I see myself being able to financially help my family" but either is fine.

Having stuff just for me means nothing if I can not help my loved ones.

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Good luck with your journey of self-improvement!

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Kist

Sept. 9, 2022

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Thank you so much, your corrections help a lot!

FWho I will be five years from now, I will be.

I wish in five years (time), I would have overcoame a lot of the fears I have today.

Among the list of things I would like to be better isn ins my spoken English spoken (skills), but more than be better I wantthat, I would like to be more confidencet.

“To be better in” is a phrase so you can’t split it up.

Spoken english already implies the skill but you can add it in if you want :D

Confidence is a noun so you can either say “I want to be more confident” or “I want to have more confidence”. Though I prefer the former.

I have learned that evendespite having everything you want, withhaving no confidence people would not make so manyhinders people from making more decisions in their lifeves.

Personally, I have to work a lot ion my personality and my self -control meaningwhich refers to my emotions.

I’m not quite understanding what self-control means here. Based one what I understand, I would rather say, “Personally, I still have a lot to work on my personality and controlling my emotions.”

LetIn many cases, letting your thoughts control you in many cases is sos very counterproductive.

Other times, stress can be helpful but that is not in my case.

So, getting back to howwhat I will be like to be in five years, it would be being self confident and less shy.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything iscan be done by will, you and sometimes, you will need more than that.

I see myself being secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.

Living in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keep pushconstantly striving to have mya house in Puerto Rico and moving forward to the job aI want.

“Have my house in Puerto Rico” sounds like moving your physical house to Puerto Rico to me.

Most of all, I see myself being able to help my family financially.

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Good luck mate! Hope you will achieve your goals in five years!

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Kist

Sept. 9, 2022

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Thanks for your help and your wishes!

Five years from now, I will be.

Five years from now, I will be...

FWho I will be five years from now, I will be.

Five years from now, I will be...

Five years from nNow, I will be.

This kind of topic sometimes makes me feel so thoughtful, because I would like to be so many things.

I wish in five years I would overcome a lot of the fears I have today.

I wishhope that in five years I wouldill have overcome a lot of the fears I have today.

I wish in five years (time), I would have overcoame a lot of the fears I have today.

I wish that in five years I would have overcome a lot of the fears I have today.

I wish in five years, I wouldish to have overcome a lot of the fears I have today.

Among the list of things I would like to be better is in my English spoken skills, but more than be better I want to be confidence.

Among the list of things I would like to be better is in my English spoken skills, but more than beimprove in is speaking English. More than just being better at it, I want to be confidencet.

Among the list of things I would like to be better isn ins my spoken English spoken (skills), but more than be better I wantthat, I would like to be more confidencet.

Among the list of things I would like to be better is in my English spokeneaking skills, but more than be betterthat I want to be confidencet.

Among the list of things I would like to be better is in myn/at is spoken English spoken skills, but more than be betterthat, I want to be confidencet.

I have learned that even having everything you want, with no confidence people would not make so many decisions in their life.

I have learned that even havingif one has everything youthey want, with no confidence people would not, they hesitate when makeing so many decisions in their life.

I have learned that evendespite having everything you want, withhaving no confidence people would not make so manyhinders people from making more decisions in their lifeves.

I have learned that even having everything you want, with if people had no confidence peoplethey would not be able to make so many decisions in their life.

I have learned that even having everything you want, with no confidence people would cannot make so manya lot of decisions in their lifeves.

Personally, I have to work a lot in my personality and myself control meaning my emotions.

Personally, I have to work a lot ion my personality and myself control meanling my emotions.

Personally, I have to work a lot ion my personality and my self -control meaningwhich refers to my emotions.

Personally, I have to work a lot ion my personalitycharacter and my self -control meaning. In other words, my emotions.

Personally, I have to work a lot in my personality and myself controlling myself, meaning my emotions.

Let your thoughts control you in many cases is so counterproductive.

Letting your thoughts control you is, in many cases is so, counterproductive.

LetIn many cases, letting your thoughts control you in many cases is sos very counterproductive.

Letting your thoughts control you in many cases is so counterproductive.

Letting your thoughts control you in many cases is so counterproductive.

Other times, stress can be helpful but that is not my case.

Other times, stress can be helpful, but that is not true in my case.

Other times, stress can be helpful but that is not in my case.

Other times, stress can be helpful, but that is not true in my case.

So, getting back to how I will be like to be in five years, it would be being self confident and less shy.

So, getting back to how I willould be like to be in five years, itI would be beinglike to be self confident and less shy.

So, getting back to howwhat I will be like to be in five years, it would be being self confident and less shy.

So, getting back to how I willant to be like to be in five years, it would be beingmore self confident and less shy.

So, getting back to how I will beould like to be in five years, it would be being selfgaining more confidentce and being less shy.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will, you need more than that.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will,can be achieved with just willpower; you need more than that.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything iscan be done by will, you and sometimes, you will need more than that.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will, y. You need more than [just] that.

To get rid of some characteristics, I know I will need therapy, because not everything is done by will, sometimes you need more than that.

I see myself secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.

I see myself being secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.

I see myself being secure, speaking better English and having a more fulfilling life.,

Living in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keep pushing to have my house in Puerto Rico and moving forward to the job a want.

LI see myself living in a better place and having a better lifestyle,. I keep pushing to have mya house in Puerto Rico and moving forward toget the job aI want.

Living in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keep pushconstantly striving to have mya house in Puerto Rico and moving forward to the job aI want.

Lliving in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keepcontinuing to pushing to have my house in Puerto Rico, and moving forward to the job aI want.

Living in a better place and having a better lifestyle, keep pushing to have my house in Puerto Rico and moving forward to thea job aI want.

Most of all I see myself being able to help my family financially.

Most of all, I see myself being able to help my family financially.

Most of all, I see myself being able to help my family financially.

Most of all, I see myself being able to help my family financially.

Having stuff just for me means nothing if I can not help my loved ones.

Having stuff just for me means nothing if I can not help my loved ones.

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