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Oct. 19, 2022

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Extraordinary Attorney Woo

At home now we are watching a Korean series named "Extraordinary Attorney Woo". Woo is an autistic lawyer that after graduating as the first of her class, at the end, after to try in other firms without positive results, she can get an opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm. The interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players is very good too. She has very problems with things that can seem silly for other people, like the revolting doors. But, on the other hand, she has an awesome memory and she prove to be very intelligent. In her actions, she is usually very espontaneous and she make funny postures. At the end, you will love her.

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Extraordinary Attorney Woo

At home now we are watching a Korean series named ", _Extraordinary Attorney Woo"_.

I realize we can't underline or italicize words in LangCorrect but I wanted to make sure that you knew that we only use quotation marks for titles of poems, articles, short stories and songs. We remember this by using the PASS acronym: Poems, Articles, Short Stories, Songs.

Woo is an autistic lawyer thatwho, after graduating ast the firsttop of her class, at the end, after to tryrying to work in other firms without positive results, she can getin the end, receives an opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm.

ThePark Eun-bin's interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players isthe actors are very good, too.

She has very problems with things, like revolving doors, that can seem silly for other people, like the revolting doors.

But, oOn the other hand, however, she has an awesome memory and shehas proven to be very intelligent.

In her actions, she is usually very espontxtemporaneous andso she makes funny pogestures.

AtIn the end, you will love her.

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Ducky

Oct. 20, 2022

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Thanks, I really appreciate your correction and feedback.

At home now we a're watching a Korean series namhow called "Extraordinary Attorney Woo".

We use contractions with apostrophes always unless we're making emphasis on something or it's formal writing. And we don't say "series" too often, we more often say show. And "called" just sounds more casual and native

Woo is an autistic lawyer that afterwho graduatinged ast the firsttop of her class, at the end, a. After to try ing at other firms without positive results, she canfinally gets an opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm.

Too many commas/clauses, it works better to make it two separate sentences.

ThePark Eun-bin's interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players isthe actors are very good too.

We don't put actors names in quotation marks, and they're called actors not players. Players is for sports

She has very problems with things that can seem silly for other people, like the revoltving doors.

Revolting means disgusting, revolving means turning :)

But, on the other hand, she has an awesome memory and she proves to be very intelligent.

just the wrong conjugation of prove-- it's "proves". Great sentence otherwise!

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Ducky

Oct. 20, 2022

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Thanks a lot.

At home now we are We are currently watching a Korean series named "Extraordinary Attorney Woo". at home.

Woo is an autistic lawyer thatwho, after graduating as the first of her class, at the end, after to try inhaving tried to apply to other (law) firms without positive results, she cansuccess, was able to get anthe opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm.

The interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players is very goodthe cast also performs well too.

She has vermany problems with things that can seem silly for other people, like the revoltving doors.

revolting=disgusting, repugnant

But, on the other hand, she has an awesome memory and shehas proven to be very intelligent.

In her actions, she is usually very espontaneous and she makes funny postures.

At the end (of the series), you will love her.

Extraordinary Attorney Woo

At home now we are watching a Korean series named "Extraordinary Attorney Woo".

At home now we are watching a Korean series named ", _Extraordinary Attorney Woo"_.

At home now we a're watching a Korean series namhow called "Extraordinary Attorney Woo".

At home now we are We are currently watching a Korean series named "Extraordinary Attorney Woo". at home.

Woo is an autistic lawyer that after graduating as the first of her class, at the end, after to try in other firms without positive results, she can get an opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm.

Woo is an autistic lawyer thatwho, after graduating ast the firsttop of her class, at the end, after to tryrying to work in other firms without positive results, she can getin the end, receives an opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm.

Woo is an autistic lawyer that afterwho graduatinged ast the firsttop of her class, at the end, a. After to try ing at other firms without positive results, she canfinally gets an opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm.

Woo is an autistic lawyer thatwho, after graduating as the first of her class, at the end, after to try inhaving tried to apply to other (law) firms without positive results, she cansuccess, was able to get anthe opportunity to work in a prestigious law firm.

The interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players is very good too.

ThePark Eun-bin's interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players isthe actors are very good, too.

ThePark Eun-bin's interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players isthe actors are very good too.

The interpretation of "Park Eun-bin" as Woo is simply great, and the rest of players is very goodthe cast also performs well too.

She has very problems with things that can seem silly for other people, like the revolting doors.

She has very problems with things, like revolving doors, that can seem silly for other people, like the revolting doors.

She has very problems with things that can seem silly for other people, like the revoltving doors.

She has vermany problems with things that can seem silly for other people, like the revoltving doors.

But, on the other hand, she has an awesome memory and she prove to be very intelligent.

But, oOn the other hand, however, she has an awesome memory and shehas proven to be very intelligent.

But, on the other hand, she has an awesome memory and she proves to be very intelligent.

But, on the other hand, she has an awesome memory and shehas proven to be very intelligent.

In her actions, she is usually very espontaneous and she make funny postures.

In her actions, she is usually very espontxtemporaneous andso she makes funny pogestures.

In her actions, she is usually very espontaneous and she makes funny postures.

At the end, you will love her.

AtIn the end, you will love her.

At the end (of the series), you will love her.

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