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Jan. 28, 2021

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It is critically important for people to have a happy and prosperous life, they can achieve this when they have sufficient time to spend quality time with family or a successful career. Thus, people derive their happiness in various forms. From my perspective, I think that this generation is leading a comfortable life than the older generation. This is because of the luxury of time available to fulfill their aspirations and also access to the availability of the resources, which is why I agree with the statement.


To begin with, people today have flexible work schedules, so they are working conveniently and using the time efficiently. This means people have options these days like they can work either four complete days or five consecutive days to complete their tasks. Therefore, people are completing the projects and using the remaining days for their personal life. In contrast, in the past people have to work completely five days a week despite the task completion. Moreover, in the earlier days, people did not have choices apart from working. While, today even though I have a nine-to-five routine, I have the flexibility to work according to my schedule and finish the task ahead of time. Also, I can use the remaining days for my vacation. For instance, when I was working with a Semantics company, I used my holidays to visit a new place. Therefore, I visited many places with my flexible hours which is not the case with my grandparents. They hardly had three vacations during my grandfather's work schedule.

Besides, the luxury of time, these days people have enormous information to explore and use it based on their requirements. In the past, people have limited access to resources, so they are skilled in one area, but my generation is doing jobs at the same time enrolling for the courses online. For example, early on in my career, when I was working for a Bharat Biotech in Hyderabad, I was proficient in analytics, but I want to improve my skill set. As a result, I had enrolled in C programming classes and successfully completed my course work parallel to my job. Thus, people nowadays have more scope for enhancing their skills, while my grandparents have had no chances to work and study at the same time. Indeed, they did not have internet either to register or check for the course. I was able to complete my programming skills because of the online courses that suit my schedule. Had I not acquired skills in programming, I would not have been developed as a well-rounded person.

In conclusion, I believe that people these days enjoying life better than the older generation because of the availability of time as well as access to resources.


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Essay for- any suggestions?

It is critically important for people to have a happy and prosperous life, t. They can achieve this when they have sufficient time to spend quality time with family or a successful career.

Thus, people derive theirfind happiness in various formways.

From my perspective, I think that this generation is leading a more comfortable life than the older generation.

This is because ofthey have the luxury of time available to fulfill their aspirations and also access to the availability of the resources, which is why I agree with the statementnecessary resources.

To begin with, people today have flexible work schedules, so they are working conveniently and usinge the time efficiently.

What you wrote is correct, but it's a bit better to use the present simple here (generalization).

This means people have options these days like. For example, they can work either four complete days or five consecutive days to complete their tasks.

I'm not sure that you are using "complete" and "consecutive" correctly. Maybe double-check their meanings?

Therefore, people arecan completinge the projectsir work and usinge the remaining days for their personal life.

In contrast, in the past, people haved to work completely five days a week despite, even if they finished their task completions in less time.

Moreover, in the earlier days, people did not have choices apart from working.

While,But today, even though I have a nine-to-five routine, I have the flexibility to work according to my schedule and finish the tasks ahead of time.

Also, I can use the remaining days for my vacation.

For instance, when I was working with a Ssemantics company, I used my holidaysvacation time to visit a new place.

Therefore, I visited many places with my flexible hours, which is not the case with my grandparentsmy grandparents didn't have the chance to do.

They hardly had three vacations during my grandfather's work schedule.

Besides,In addition to the luxury of time, these days people have enormousaccess to information to explore and use it based on their requirements.

In the past, people haved limited access to resources, so they arewere only skilled in one area, but. However, my generation is doing jobs at the same time enrolling for thecan work while simultaneously taking courses online.

For example, early on in my career, when I was working for a Bharat Biotech in Hyderabad, I was proficient in analytics, but I wanted to improve my skill set.

As a result, I had enrolled in C programming classes and successfully completed my course work parallel to my job.

Thus, people nowadays have more scope for enhancing their skills, while my grandparents have had no chances to work and study at the same time.

Indeed, they did not have internet, either to register or check for the course.

I was able to complete my programming skills because of the online courses that suit my schedule.

Had I not acquired skills in programming, I would not have been developed as a well-rounded person.

In conclusion, I believe that people these days enjoying life bettermore than the older generation because of the availability of time as well as access to resources.

Essay for suggestions?

Essay for- any suggestions?

It is critically important for people to have a happy and prosperous life, they can achieve this when they have sufficient time to spend quality time with family or a successful career.

It is critically important for people to have a happy and prosperous life, t. They can achieve this when they have sufficient time to spend quality time with family or a successful career.

Thus, people derive their happiness in various forms.

Thus, people derive theirfind happiness in various formways.

From my perspective, I think that this generation is leading a comfortable life than the older generation.

From my perspective, I think that this generation is leading a more comfortable life than the older generation.

This is because of the luxury of time available to fulfill their aspirations and also access to the availability of the resources, which is why I agree with the statement.

This is because ofthey have the luxury of time available to fulfill their aspirations and also access to the availability of the resources, which is why I agree with the statementnecessary resources.

To begin with, people today have flexible work schedules, so they are working conveniently and using the time efficiently.

To begin with, people today have flexible work schedules, so they are working conveniently and usinge the time efficiently.

This means people have options these days like they can work either four complete days or five consecutive days to complete their tasks.

This means people have options these days like. For example, they can work either four complete days or five consecutive days to complete their tasks.

Therefore, people are completing the projects and using the remaining days for their personal life.

Therefore, people arecan completinge the projectsir work and usinge the remaining days for their personal life.

In contrast, in the past people have to work completely five days a week despite the task completion.

In contrast, in the past, people haved to work completely five days a week despite, even if they finished their task completions in less time.

Moreover, in the earlier days, people did not have choices apart from working.

While, today even though I have a nine-to-five routine, I have the flexibility to work according to my schedule and finish the task ahead of time.

While,But today, even though I have a nine-to-five routine, I have the flexibility to work according to my schedule and finish the tasks ahead of time.

Also, I can use the remaining days for my vacation.

For instance, when I was working with a Semantics company, I used my holidays to visit a new place.

For instance, when I was working with a Ssemantics company, I used my holidaysvacation time to visit a new place.

Therefore, I visited many places with my flexible hours which is not the case with my grandparents.

Therefore, I visited many places with my flexible hours, which is not the case with my grandparentsmy grandparents didn't have the chance to do.

They hardly had three vacations during my grandfather's work schedule.

Besides, the luxury of time, these days people have enormous information to explore and use it based on their requirements.

Besides,In addition to the luxury of time, these days people have enormousaccess to information to explore and use it based on their requirements.

In the past, people have limited access to resources, so they are skilled in one area, but my generation is doing jobs at the same time enrolling for the courses online.

In the past, people haved limited access to resources, so they arewere only skilled in one area, but. However, my generation is doing jobs at the same time enrolling for thecan work while simultaneously taking courses online.

For example, early on in my career, when I was working for a Bharat Biotech in Hyderabad, I was proficient in analytics, but I want to improve my skill set.

For example, early on in my career, when I was working for a Bharat Biotech in Hyderabad, I was proficient in analytics, but I wanted to improve my skill set.

As a result, I had enrolled in C programming classes and successfully completed my course work parallel to my job.

As a result, I had enrolled in C programming classes and successfully completed my course work parallel to my job.

Thus, people nowadays have more scope for enhancing their skills, while my grandparents have had no chances to work and study at the same time.

Thus, people nowadays have more scope for enhancing their skills, while my grandparents have had no chances to work and study at the same time.

Indeed, they did not have internet either to register or check for the course.

Indeed, they did not have internet, either to register or check for the course.

I was able to complete my programming skills because of the online courses that suit my schedule.

Had I not acquired skills in programming, I would not have been developed as a well-rounded person.

Had I not acquired skills in programming, I would not have been developed as a well-rounded person.

In conclusion, I believe that people these days enjoying life better than the older generation because of the availability of time as well as access to resources.

In conclusion, I believe that people these days enjoying life bettermore than the older generation because of the availability of time as well as access to resources.

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