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heyyawn

May 6, 2021

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Diary: A Disappearing Bus Stop

Something very weird happened today. A bus stop suddenly stopped being used. Every Thursday, I always walk 20 minutes to that bus stop in order to get to my part-time job. Today when I got there, the bus stop sign was still there and I saw many people waiting for the bus there. Then I opened my phone app to check the bus arrival time, but I was shocked to find that I couldn't check this stop. Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign don't show this stop. There was also no search on the web to find a notice that the station was not in use. After a short hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work.

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Diary: A Disappearing Bus Stop

Something very weird happened today.

A bus stop suddenly stopped being used.

Every Thursday, I always walk 20 minutes to that bus stop in order to get to my part-time job.

Today when I got there, the bus stop sign was still there and I saw many people waiting for the bus there.

Then I opened my phone app to check the bus arrival time, but I was shocked to find that I couldn't check this stop.

Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign doidn't show this stop.

There was also no search on the web to find a noticeinformation on the web(site) that the station was not in use.

I'm not sure I understand exactly what you mean here, but I take this to mean you looked for information on the bus company's website and couldn't find anything.

After a shortmoment's hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work.

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Nicely done!

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heyyawn

May 7, 2021

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Thank you very much :)

Diary: A Disappearing Bus Stop

Something very weird happened today.

A bus stop suddenly stopped being used.

Every Thursday, I always walk 20 minutes to that bus stop in order to get to my part-time job.

Today when I got there, the bus stop sign was still there and I saw many people waiting for the bus there.

Then I opened my phone app to check the bus arrival time, but I was shocked to find that I couldn't check this stop.

Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign don't show this stop.

Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign doidn't show this stop.

There was also no search on the web to find a notice that the station was not in use.

There was also no search on the web to find a noticeinformation on the web(site) that the station was not in use.

After a short hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work.

After a shortmoment's hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work.

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