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heyyawn

Aug. 7, 2021

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I had planned to go to the nursing home today with my mom and grandpa to see my grandma, but the nursing home doesn't allow outsiders, probably because of Covid.
I haven't get the vaccine because the Chinese vaccines don't seem to work for Covid-19's Delta variant. The latest outbreak in China was due to the Delta variant infecting staff at the Nanjing airport who had got the Chinese vaccine.
However, my mom asked me to go with her to get the vaccine some day because the government had previously issued a notice stating that people who are not vaccinated cannot go to public places such as schools, banks, libraries, etc. The QR code will be checked when we enter these places. The QR code for healthy body is green and the border of the QR code for vaccinated people will be gold.
I was hesitant to get the vaccine because there has been no documented adverse reactions to the Chinese vaccine. Looking forward to the mRNA vaccine entering China sooner.

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Diary

I had planned to go to the nursing home today with my mom and grandpa to see my grandma, but the nursing home doesn't allow outsiders, probably because of Covid.

I haven't geot the vaccine because the Chinese vaccines don't seem to work for Covid-19's Delta variant.

Past participle of "'o get' is required for correct use of the past tense

The latest outbreak in China was due to the Delta variant infecting staff at the Nanjing airport who had gotten the Chinese vaccine.

Past participle of 'to get' is required
Alternatively you can say 'who had "received" the Chinese vaccine'

However, my mom asked me to go with her to get the vaccine some day because the government had previously issued a notice stating that people who are not vaccinated cannot go to public places such as schools, banks, libraries, etc.

The QR code will be checked when we enter these places.

The QR code for a healthy bodyperson is green and the border of the QR code for vaccinated people will be gold.

I was hesitant to get the vaccine because there has been no documented adverse reactions to the Chinese vaccine.

LI am looking forward to the mRNA vaccine entering China sooner.

This informal English is fine but a grammatically correct English requires a subject (a person or thing who is doing the verb).

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This is really well written with only minor mistakes. I can see your English is strong. Keep it up!

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heyyawn

Aug. 10, 2021

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Thanks :)

Diary

I had planned to go to the nursing home today with my mom and grandpa to see my grandma, but the nursing home doesn't allow outsiders, probably because of Covid.

I haven't get the vaccine because the Chinese vaccines don't seem to work for Covid-19's Delta variant.

I haven't geot the vaccine because the Chinese vaccines don't seem to work for Covid-19's Delta variant.

The latest outbreak in China was due to the Delta variant infecting staff at the Nanjing airport who had got the Chinese vaccine.

The latest outbreak in China was due to the Delta variant infecting staff at the Nanjing airport who had gotten the Chinese vaccine.

However, my mom asked me to go with her to get the vaccine some day because the government had previously issued a notice stating that people who are not vaccinated cannot go to public places such as schools, banks, libraries, etc.

The QR code will be checked when we enter these places.

The QR code for healthy body is green and the border of the QR code for vaccinated people will be gold.

The QR code for a healthy bodyperson is green and the border of the QR code for vaccinated people will be gold.

I was hesitant to get the vaccine because there has been no documented adverse reactions to the Chinese vaccine.

Looking forward to the mRNA vaccine entering China sooner.

LI am looking forward to the mRNA vaccine entering China sooner.

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