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heyyawn

Aug. 1, 2021

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I've been feeling bad lately. Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes. I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about. I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all. Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times. This is not a good start. Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.

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Diary

I've been feeling bad lately.

Whatever it is, now it fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.

I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about.

I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framingd like to write about are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.

Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times.

This is not a good start.

Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.

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I get this feeling all the time! What works for me, is writing a first draft that's not so good and then improving it later. Good luck!

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pringerx

Aug. 2, 2021

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I feel you, this is me every day I sit in front of my computer to write an entry for langcorrect, staring at a blank page completely no idea what to write about...

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heyyawn

Aug. 3, 2021

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I feel you, this is me every day I sit in front of my computer to write an entry for langcorrect, staring at a blank page completely no idea what to write about...

Thank you for your reply and corrections!

Diary

I've been feeling bad lately.

Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.

I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about.

I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and. I have no control over them at all.

I split up the sentence because it was a bit long. Not sure what you mean by "I have no control over them at all." Is it that you don't have the knowledge to write about the topics? Or that you feel like you can't stop yourself from taking on overly ambitious tasks?

Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3three times.

Technically, you should write out 1-9 and use numerals for 10+. But native speakers get this wrong (or ignore the rule) all the time.

This is not a good start.

Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.

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heyyawn

Aug. 3, 2021

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Thanks :)

Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.

I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about.

I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing want to bring up are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.

Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times.

This is not a good start.

Moreover, the process of drafwriting the writingdraft took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.

sometimes we call drafting the writing a "rough draft" or just a "draft". you could also just say "drafting took too long".

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Great journal, your thoughts came out clearly. I hope your classes gets easier for you and you accomplish your goals. keep going

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heyyawn

Aug. 3, 2021

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Thanks :)

Diary

I've been feeling bad lately.

Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.

Whatever it is, now it fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes.

I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about.

I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.

I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framingd like to write about are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.

I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and. I have no control over them at all.

I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing want to bring up are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all.

Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times.

Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3three times.

This is not a good start.

Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.

Moreover, the process of drafwriting the writingdraft took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.

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