June 21, 2021
Day Twenty-One: How Do You Like to Celebrate Your Birthday?
I would like to celebrate my birthday by eating delicious foods. When I was a child, I was happy to get presents on my birthday. However, I don't think want too many things now. Instead, I want to reduce things around me. Foods are temporary but they will turn into my body and the happy memory will stay in my mind almost forever.
Day Twenty-One: How Do You Like to Celebrate Your Birthday?
I would like to celebrate my birthday by eating delicious foods.
When I was a child, I was happy to get presents on my birthday.
However, I don't think want too many things nowwant much anymore.
Instead, I want to reduce things around me.
Foods are temporary but they will turn into my body and the happy memory will stay in my mind almost forever.
Food is only temporary but the happy memories will stay in my mind forever
June 21, 2021
Almost perfect - two of the sentences were a bit long winded so I simplified them.
June 22, 2021
Thank you for your suggestion!
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Day Twenty-One: How Do You Like to Celebrate Your Birthday? |
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I would like to celebrate my birthday by eating delicious foods. |
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When I was a child, I was happy to get presents on my birthday. |
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However, I don't think want too many things now. However, I don't |
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Instead, I want to reduce things around me. |
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Foods are temporary but they will turn into my body and the happy memory will stay in my mind almost forever. Foods are temporary but they will turn into my body and the happy memory will stay in my mind almost forever. Food is only temporary but the happy memories will stay in my mind forever
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