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SummerTeaWater

April 4, 2022

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Considering Family More

Recently, I had a lot of work, it is not easy to come home quickly.

I want to look after my kids, but I also want to work for making more money.

Last week, I watched the movie called 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' and a sentence catched my mind.

"There's plenty of money out there. They print more every day. But this ticket, there's only five of them in the whole world. Only a dummy would give this up for something as common as money."

Money is not forever, but my family is forever.

I have to do higher priority for my family.

Corrections

Recently, I have had a lot of work, it is not easy toso I have come home quicklylater.

I want to look after my kids, but I also want to work forto makinge more money.

Last week, I watched the movie called 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' and a sentence catched my mindught my attention.

"There's plenty of money out there.

They print more every day.

But this ticket, there's only five of them in the whole world.

Only a dummy would give this up for something as common as money.

Money is not forever, but my family is forever.

I have to do higherpriotise/ priority forize my family. more

Note, 'prioritise' is the British spelling, while 'prioritize' is the American spelling.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

April 4, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Considering Family More

Recently, I have had a lot of work so, it is not easy to come home quickly.

I want to look after my kids, but I also want to work forto makinge more money.

Last week, I watched the movie called 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' and a sentence catched my mindught my attention.

"There's plenty of money out there.

They print more every day.

But this ticket, there's only five of them in the whole world.

Only a dummy would give this up for something as common as money.

"

Money is not forever, but my family is forever.

I have to do higher priority forise my family.

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Good writing, that is a very nice quote as well :)

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

April 4, 2022

402

Always thank you so much. :)

Considering Family More

Recently, I had a lot of work, it is not easy to come home quickly.

Recently, I have had a lot of work so, it is not easy to come home quickly.

Recently, I have had a lot of work, it is not easy toso I have come home quicklylater.

I want to look after my kids, but I also want to work for making more money.

I want to look after my kids, but I also want to work forto makinge more money.

I want to look after my kids, but I also want to work forto makinge more money.

Last week, I watched the movie called 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' and a sentence catched my mind.

Last week, I watched the movie called 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' and a sentence catched my mindught my attention.

Last week, I watched the movie called 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' and a sentence catched my mindught my attention.

"There's plenty of money out there.

They print more every day.

But this ticket, there's only five of them in the whole world.

Only a dummy would give this up for something as common as money.

"

Money is not forever, but my family is forever.

I have to do higher priority for my family.

I have to do higherpriotise/ priority forize my family. more

I have to do higher priority forise my family.

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