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vuongnguyen

June 4, 2023

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I had a vacation in the last year. My company has about 30 staffs. We went to visit a beach city of Viet Nam. The name's beach city is Phu Quoc. It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches. Where We stayed is a hotel near the beach. We stayed there 3 days 2 nights. In the morning, I had bread for breakfast. Then I went to the beach with my co-workers. We had great time there. The air is clean there, I like it. In the evening, We had sea food for dinner at night market. I drived around city by motobike. I bought some things there.

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COMPANY TRIP

I had awent on vacation in the last year.

My company has about 30 staffs.

"staff" is uncountable (unless you mean a big stick a wizard or warrior might use).

We went to visited a beach city ofin Viet Nnam.

The name's of the beach city is Phu Quoc.

or "the beach city's name" name is "owned" by beach city.

It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches.

Where We stayed isn a hotel near the beach.

We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights.

you do something "for" a time period

In the morning, I had bread for breakfast.

Then I went to the beach with my co-workers.

We had a great time there.

The air is clean there,. I like it.

Two sentences needs . between

In the evening, Wwe had sea food for dinner at the night market.

lower case "w" as not a new sentence.

I drioved a round city by motorbike. and

drive is a strong verb and the past tense is therefore irregular

I bought some things there.

join these two sentences together.

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Sounds very pleasant.

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vuongnguyen

June 7, 2023

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Thank you very much!

I hadtook a vacation in the last year.

My company has about 30 staffemployees.

We went to visit a beach city ofin Viet Nam.

The name's of the beach city is Phu Quoc.

It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches.

Where Wwe stayed i, there was a hotel near the beach.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.

We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights.

In the morning, I had bread for breakfast.

Then I went to the beach with my co-workers.

We had great time there.

The air is clean there, I like it.

In the evening, Wwe had sea food for dinner at a night market.

I drioved around the city by motorbike.

I bought some things there.

This is correct, but it would be more natural to say "I bought a few souvenirs" or something like that.

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vuongnguyen

June 7, 2023

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Thank you very much!

My company has about 30 staffs.

Staff should not be plural

Where We stayed isn a hotel near the beach.

We had a great time there.

The air is clean there,; I like it.

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vuongnguyen

June 7, 2023

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Thank you very much!

COMPANY TRIP

I had a vacation in the last year.

I had awent on vacation in the last year.

I hadtook a vacation in the last year.

My company has about 30 staffs.

My company has about 30 staffs.

My company has about 30 staffemployees.

My company has about 30 staffs.

We went to visit a beach city of Viet Nam.

We went to visited a beach city ofin Viet Nnam.

We went to visit a beach city ofin Viet Nam.

The name's beach city is Phu Quoc.

The name's of the beach city is Phu Quoc.

The name's of the beach city is Phu Quoc.

It has great nightlife and there are a lot of beautiful beaches.

Where We stayed is a hotel near the beach.

Where We stayed isn a hotel near the beach.

Where Wwe stayed i, there was a hotel near the beach.

Where We stayed isn a hotel near the beach.

We stayed there 3 days 2 nights.

We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights.

We stayed there for 3 days and 2 nights.

In the morning, I had bread for breakfast.

Then I went to the beach with my co-workers.

We had great time there.

We had a great time there.

We had great time there.

We had a great time there.

The air is clean there, I like it.

The air is clean there,. I like it.

The air is clean there, I like it.

The air is clean there,; I like it.

In the evening, We had sea food for dinner at night market.

In the evening, Wwe had sea food for dinner at the night market.

In the evening, Wwe had sea food for dinner at a night market.

I drived around city by motobike.

I drioved a round city by motorbike. and

I drioved around the city by motorbike.

I bought some things there.

I bought some things there.

I bought some things there.

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