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June 11, 2021

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CHALLENGE 12: Dream Home

Three years ago I went to see a concert in Shanghai. I like the room where I stayed only one night. The room was actually very small, but quite functional. In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I like the bed the most, it is the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you can put clothes and books and so on, and you can sit on the floor to read things.

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CHALLENGE 12: Dream Home

Three years ago I went to see a concert in Shanghai.

I liked the room where I stayed onlyI stayed in even though I only stayed in it for one night.

The room was actually very small, but quite functional.

In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I liked the bed the most, it i. It was the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you canwith the mattress on top and a shelf in the bottom. You could put clothes and books and so on, and you c in the shelf and sit on the floor to read things.

If by carpet you mean the whole floor was carpet (as opposed to there being a carpet on some other kind of flooring) you need to say something like "carpetting" without the "a" like this: "a refrigerator, a washing machine, a TV, a small sofa, a table, carpetting, a bookshelf, etc."

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heyyawn

June 12, 2021

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CHALLENGE 12: Dream Home

Three years ago I went to see a concert in Shanghai.

I like the room where I stayed only one night.

I liked the room where I stayed onlyI stayed in even though I only stayed in it for one night.

The room was actually very small, but quite functional.

In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I like the bed the most, it is the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you can put clothes and books and so on, and you can sit on the floor to read things.

In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I liked the bed the most, it i. It was the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you canwith the mattress on top and a shelf in the bottom. You could put clothes and books and so on, and you c in the shelf and sit on the floor to read things.

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