June 10, 2021
CHALLENGE 11
I don't have a particular favorite, and almost everything is replaceable for me.
This article seems too short. So, let me introduce my scissors. This scissors, with rounded front, protect the hands of small children from being pricked. I remember this feature well because it came from my kindergarten teacher's request - so this is a pair of scissors that has been in use for almost 20 years! In kindergarten, this pair of scissors had my school number taped on the handle. In elementary school, it was always placed on the bag in front of my school bag, although I don't know why I brought scissors to school every day. I almost lost it when I lent it to my elementary school teacher to cut paper pieces... Now the scissors are on my desk and still work well.
CHALLENGE 11
I don't have a particular favorite, and almost everything is replaceable for me.
This articlejournal seems too short.
If by "article" you mean this post, then these posts are called journals.
So, let me introduce my scissors.
Thisese scissors, with rounded fronttips, protect the hands of small children from being pricked.
I remember this feature well because it came from my kindergarten teacher's request - so this is a pair of scissors that has been in use for almost 20 years!
In kindergarten, this pair of scissors had my school's number taped on the handle.
In elementary school, it was always placed oninside the bag in front of my school bag, although I don't know why I brought scissors to school every day.
I don't really understand what "placed on the bag in front of my school bag" means. Did you bring two bags two school, one with scissors inside and one a schoolbag?
I almost lost it when I lent it to my elementary school teacher to cut paper pieces... Now the scissors are on my desk and still work well.
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Nice work. Yeah, I also remember having a similar pair of scissors as a child.
June 11, 2021
In elementary school, it was always placed oninside the bag in front of my school bag, although I don't know why I brought scissors to school every day.
I don't really understand what "placed on the bag in front of my school bag" means. Did you bring two bags two school, one with scissors inside and one a schoolbag?
One bag. placed inside the pocket in front of my schoolbag? 🤔
Thank you very much for the corrections!
June 12, 2021
One bag. placed inside the pocket in front of my schoolbag? 🤔 Thank you very much for the corrections!
Ahh right, yeah you'd say pocket there. it was always placed in the pocket in front of my schoolbag, it was always placed in my schoolbag's front pocket.
You're welcome!
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I don't have a particular favorite, and almost everything is replaceable for me. |
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This article seems too short. This If by "article" you mean this post, then these posts are called journals.
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So, let me introduce my scissors. |
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This scissors, with rounded front, protect the hands of small children from being pricked. Th |
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I remember this feature well because it came from my kindergarten teacher's request - so this is a pair of scissors that has been in use for almost 20 years! |
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In kindergarten, this pair of scissors had my school number taped on the handle. In kindergarten, this pair of scissors had my school's number taped on the handle. |
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In elementary school, it was always placed on the bag in front of my school bag, although I don't know why I brought scissors to school every day. In elementary school, it was always placed I don't really understand what "placed on the bag in front of my school bag" means. Did you bring two bags two school, one with scissors inside and one a schoolbag?
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I almost lost it when I lent it to my elementary school teacher to cut paper pieces... Now the scissors are on my desk and still work well. |
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