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shoupunk

Nov. 20, 2021

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I stayed in front of my keyboard during at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.
I still have no idea.
Should I just say "Hi, I'm new" ? No originality but it's important to say hello.

So, hi, I'm new. But then ?

I'm here to practise, I need to find something to write.

I decided to talk about my rug. Just because "rug" is one of this words I still remember even if I never use them. Like wrinkle or platypus.
Its a rectangular purple rug. My aunt gave it to me when I settled into my first apartment. I wonder why I keep it because I don't like this colour. I don't even like rugs, too difficult to clean . Thanks to the rug I eventually wrote something.

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

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I stayed in front of my keyboard during at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.

I stayed in front of my keyboard duringfor at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.

I still have no idea.

Should I just say "Hi, I'm new" ?

No originality but it's important to say hello.

So, hi, I'm new.

But then ?

But then ?

I'm here to practise, I need to find something to write.

I'm here to practisce, so I need to find something to write.

I decided to talk about my rug.

Just because "rug" is one of this words I still remember even if I never use them.

Just because "rug" is one of thise words I still remember even if I never use them.

Like wrinkle or platypus.

Its a rectangular purple rug.

My aunt gave it to me when I settled into my first apartment.

I wonder why I keep it because I don't like this colour.

I don't even like rugs, they're too difficult to clean .

Thanks to the rug I eventually wrote something.

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

Feedback

We don't have a space after a word, and before a punctuation mark. Eg; if? (good) if ? (nope!)

It's nothing major, but something to remember :)

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shoupunk

Nov. 20, 2021

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I didn't know about the punctuation mark thank you !

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Janie

Nov. 20, 2021

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You just did it! Haha!

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shoupunk

Nov. 26, 2021

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Yeah... I just did it! You say haha in english? We say ahah in french :)

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Janie

Nov. 27, 2021

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I also say aha or ahah! Keep up your studies and let me know if you have any questions :)

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shoupunk

Nov. 26, 2021

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Thank you there is a lot of word/sentences I don't know about in your translation :)

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shoupunk

Nov. 26, 2021

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Didn't know about ?

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I stayed in front of my keyboard during at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.

I stayed in front of my keyboard duringfor at least an hour, asking myself about what to write.

I still have no idea.

Should I just say "Hi, I'm new" ?

No originality but it's important to say hello.

So, hi, I'm new.

But then ?

But then ?

I'm here to practise, I need to find something to write.

I'm here to practisce, so I need to find something to write.

I decided to talk about my rug.

Just because "rug" is one of this words I still remember even if I never use them.

Just because "rug" is one of thise words I still remember even if I never use them.

Like wrinkle or platypus.

Its a rectangular purple rug.

My aunt gave it to me when I settled into my first apartment.

I wonder why I keep it because I don't like this colour.

I don't even like rugs, too difficult to clean .

I don't even like rugs, they're too difficult to clean .

Thanks to the rug I eventually wrote something.

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

Never mind if it's about rugs, weather or clothes, I used English words and that's what really matters, right ?

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