April 12, 2021
Jeju Island is the biggest island in Korea.
Because of beautiful scenery and delicious foods, not only Korean but also Chinese and Japanese are like to visit the island.
Ten years ago, my college friends and I visited the island for traveling around the island by bicycle.
The distance around there is more than 240 km and many people used to complete to ride during a week.
However, we only had 3 days and available time is only 48 hours excepting taking a plane.
So we had to ride from dawn till midnight.
I was very tired by the overface, but I could have many interesting memories.
The tangerines were more delicious during riding, I had a Horse Meat Bulgoji very first time.
And the most impressed moment was when I saw shooting stars riding midnight.
If I will have a change, I will go there to ride once again.
Bicycle tour in Jeju Island
Jeju Island is the biggest island in Korea.
Because of beautiful scenery and delicious foods, n cuisine. Not only Korean but alsopeople but Chinese and Japanese arpeople alike to visit the island.
Cuisine( another word for food) pronounced koo-seen
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I’m not sure if your were taking about tourists or locals.
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The tangerines wtastere more delicious during riding, I had a Horse Meat Bulgojiand I tried Bulgoji Horse meat very first time.
And the most impresseding moment for¶
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If I will have a change,ce again. I will go there to ride horses once again.
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Very good as always.!! Just mostly style mistakes. I know in Korean sentences are written in subject+ object+ verborder. compared to English which is written in subject+Verb+object
Bicycle tour in Jeju Island |
Jeju Island is the biggest island in Korea. |
Because of beautiful scenery and delicious foods, not only Korean but also Chinese and Japanese are like to visit the island. Because of beautiful scenery and delicious food Cuisine( another word for food) pronounced koo-seen
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Ten years ago, my college friends and I visited the island for traveling around the island by bicycle. Ten years ago, my college friends and I visited the island |
The distance around there is more than 240 km and many people used to complete to ride during a week. The distance to ride around the I’m not sure if your were taking about tourists or locals.
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However, we only had 3 days and available time is only 48 hours excepting taking a plane. However, we |
So we had to ride from dawn till midnight. So we had to |
I was very tired by the overface, but I could have many interesting memories. I was very tired by the |
The tangerines were more delicious during riding, I had a Horse Meat Bulgoji very first time. The tangerines |
And the most impressed moment was when I saw shooting stars riding midnight. And the most impress |
If I will have a change, I will go there to ride once again. If I |
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