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kiwy

Sept. 22, 2021

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This morning, my father told me to wait him at the corner. When I opened the car door, I saw a woman sitting on the right side. So I went to the left side to put down my luggage. When I closed the door and went to the shotgun seat, the car left. Yep, it left without me. I was a little confused at first, I thought that maybe my father want to change a place to let me in. However, the car just left quickly. I spoke loudly to ask my father stop, but I failed. Then I ran after it fast, but failed either. I went to the gate and called my father.
He went back to pick me up a few minutes later. I was so angry that I accused him of careless. But my father contradicted angrily that he thought I was in the car because he heard the sound of door closing. The woman sat in the rear said that she also considered I had gotten in because she also heard the sound of door closing, when she was having a nap. I realized that he would never admitted his mistake. As for he was driving, I didn't want to make him angry, so I told him that it was all my fault. Then he became quiet.
Then I went to school, I found three boys were absent. I called for their parents, one of them replied that they arrived very early, the others didn't answer the phone. A few minutes later, there were about ten students stood in front of the teaching building with the teaching leaders. They were stopped bucause of late for class. When they went upstairs, I asked them why they were late. They all went to the dormitory first, one of them arrived school at 07:43, while they were asked arrive before 07:40. So, his grandpa lied. I punished them for cleaning classroom for two weeks. Then I told the incident in the parents chatting group. I had redeclared the arriving time for more than three times, but some parents still didn't take their responsibility, what they did was bad for the whole class.
During the second class, I receive many photos about my students who were just standing in the school yard when they should had cleaning the yard. They spent a class there when the other students were all having class. It was the third time they were accused of default in cleaning their clean zone. What should I say? I didn't know. It is so boring of teaching them.
I played drums in the afternoon. I ran 2 km at night. I need to relax more.

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Anger

This morning, my father told me to wait for him aton the corner outside the house.

When I opened the car door, I saw a woman sitting on the right side.

Probably better to just say she was sitting in the passenger seat or in the backseat.

So I went to the left side to put down my luggagemy bags in the car.

When I closed the door and went to the shotgunget in the passenger seat, the car leftdrove away.

Shotgun is a little more informal, and usually it's just "shotgun".

Yep, it left without me.

I was a little confused at first, I thought that maybe my father want to change a placemove the car to let me in.

However, the car just left quickly.

I spokeyelled loudly to ask my father to stop, but I failed.

Then I ran after it fast, but failed to do that either.

I went to the gate and called my father.

He wentcame back to pick me up a few minutes later.

Went/came is a little like 出/来

I was so angry that I accuscalled him of careless.

But my father contradicted angrily that he thought I was in the car, because he had heard the sound of door closing.

The woman sat in the rear said that she also considerassumed I had gotten in because she also heard the sound of door closing, when she was having a nap.

I realized that he would never admitted his mistake.

As for he was driving, I didn't want to make him angry, so I told him that it was all my fault.

Then he became quiet.

Then I went to school, I found that three boys were absent.

I called for their parents, one of them replied that they arrived very early, the others didn't answer the phone.

A few minutes later, there were about ten students stood in front of the teaching building with the teaching leaders.

It's a little implied that it's a school building/classrooms

They were stopped buecause ofthey were late for class.

When they wentcame upstairs, I asked them why they were late.

Once again, "went" would be more like 他们一出去我就...

They all went to the dormitory first, one of them arrived to school at 07:43, while they were to asked arrive before 07:40.

So, his grandpa lied.

I punished them fortold them their punishment was cleaning classrooms for two weeks.

Wow! Harsh punishment for being 3 minutes late, although I bet they have a track record...

Then I tolreported the incident in the parents chatting group.

I had redeclariterated the arrivingal time for more than three times, but some parents still didn't take their responsibility, what they did was bad for the whole class.

During the second class, I received many photos aboutof my students who were just standing in the school yard, when they should hadve been cleaning the yard.

They spent a class there when the other students were all having class.

It was the third time they were accused of default innot cleaning their clean zone.

I think I see what you were trying to go for with 'default' but it's not really a common word in this context.

What should I say?

I didn't know.

It is'm so boringed of teaching them.

I played drums in the afternoon.

I ran 2 km at night.

I need to relax more.

Feedback

As soon as I saw the title I knew some bad stuff was going to happen. Regardless, nice writing! 希望这几天你的学生的表现会变得更好一点吧。他们好像天天闹翻天哈哈。

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kiwy

Sept. 23, 2021

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If they don't piss me up tomorrow, I will show them your comment~~

Anger

This morning, my father told me to wait him at the corner.

This morning, my father told me to wait for him aton the corner outside the house.

When I opened the car door, I saw a woman sitting on the right side.

When I opened the car door, I saw a woman sitting on the right side.

So I went to the left side to put down my luggage.

So I went to the left side to put down my luggagemy bags in the car.

When I closed the door and went to the shotgun seat, the car left.

When I closed the door and went to the shotgunget in the passenger seat, the car leftdrove away.

Yep, it left without me.

I was a little confused at first, I thought that maybe my father want to change a place to let me in.

I was a little confused at first, I thought that maybe my father want to change a placemove the car to let me in.

However, the car just left quickly.

I spoke loudly to ask my father stop, but I failed.

I spokeyelled loudly to ask my father to stop, but I failed.

Then I ran after it fast, but failed either.

Then I ran after it fast, but failed to do that either.

I went to the gate and called my father.

He went back to pick me up a few minutes later.

He wentcame back to pick me up a few minutes later.

I was so angry that I accused him of careless.

I was so angry that I accuscalled him of careless.

But my father contradicted angrily that he thought I was in the car because he heard the sound of door closing.

But my father contradicted angrily that he thought I was in the car, because he had heard the sound of door closing.

The woman sat in the rear said that she also considered I had gotten in because she also heard the sound of door closing, when she was having a nap.

The woman sat in the rear said that she also considerassumed I had gotten in because she also heard the sound of door closing, when she was having a nap.

I realized that he would never admitted his mistake.

I realized that he would never admitted his mistake.

As for he was driving, I didn't want to make him angry, so I told him that it was all my fault.

As for he was driving, I didn't want to make him angry, so I told him that it was all my fault.

Then he became quiet.

Then I went to school, I found three boys were absent.

Then I went to school, I found that three boys were absent.

I called for their parents, one of them replied that they arrived very early, the others didn't answer the phone.

I called for their parents, one of them replied that they arrived very early, the others didn't answer the phone.

A few minutes later, there were about ten students stood in front of the teaching building with the teaching leaders.

A few minutes later, there were about ten students stood in front of the teaching building with the teaching leaders.

They were stopped bucause of late for class.

They were stopped buecause ofthey were late for class.

When they went upstairs, I asked them why they were late.

When they wentcame upstairs, I asked them why they were late.

They all went to the dormitory first, one of them arrived school at 07:43, while they were asked arrive before 07:40.

They all went to the dormitory first, one of them arrived to school at 07:43, while they were to asked arrive before 07:40.

So, his grandpa lied.

I punished them for cleaning classroom for two weeks.

I punished them fortold them their punishment was cleaning classrooms for two weeks.

Then I told the incident in the parents chatting group.

Then I tolreported the incident in the parents chatting group.

I had redeclared the arriving time for more than three times, but some parents still didn't take their responsibility, what they did was bad for the whole class.

I had redeclariterated the arrivingal time for more than three times, but some parents still didn't take their responsibility, what they did was bad for the whole class.

During the second class, I receive many photos about my students who were just standing in the school yard when they should had cleaning the yard.

During the second class, I received many photos aboutof my students who were just standing in the school yard, when they should hadve been cleaning the yard.

They spent a class there when the other students were all having class.

It was the third time they were accused of default in cleaning their clean zone.

It was the third time they were accused of default innot cleaning their clean zone.

What should I say?

I didn't know.

It is so boring of teaching them.

It is'm so boringed of teaching them.

I played drums in the afternoon.

I ran 2 km at night.

I need to relax more.

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