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SummerTeaWater

April 17, 2022

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Alice Through the Looking Glass

Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".

It is the sequel film Alice in Wonderland.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.

The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.

"I'm right on time."

"Your time is up"

"It will be a race against Time"

I like these jokes.

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Alice Through the Looking Glass

Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

If something is a sequel, it is a 'sequel to' something else that came first.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.

If you say 'again' it means you did that thing before and you are now doing it a second time. If this is your first time watching this film you would just say you watched with anticipation

The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.

"I'm right on time.

"Your time is up"

"It will be a race against Time"

I like these jokes.

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SummerTeaWater

April 18, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Alice Through the Looking Glass

Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".

What you've written is correct but you could also say "I watched" or "I saw the film"

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation againlooked forward to watching this one.

The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.

"I'm right on time.

"

"Your time is up"

"It will be a race against Time"

I like these jokes.

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Good writing! Your writing is improving :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 18, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Alice Through the Looking Glass

Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.

The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.

"I'm right on time.

"Your time is up"

"It will be a race against Ttime"

I like these jokes.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

April 18, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Alice Through the Looking Glass

Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

you could also just say "It is the sequel to Alice in Wonderland" because you have already said previously you "saw" it so your reader will know it is a film

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation agains looking forward to watching this one.

Your sentence is entirely correct but it sounds overly formal, this is a less formal way you could say it

The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.

"I'm right on time.

"Your time is up"

"It will be a race against Time"

I like these jokes.

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This is very good writing!
The only big change I made was about sounding less formal, the way you've written it is too formal even to speak to your boss, it sounds like how I image the queen would talk. However, it was not an incorrect sentence so don't worry about that :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 18, 2022

402

Ah, I got it. Thank you.

Alice Through the Looking Glass

Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".

Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".

It is the sequel film Alice in Wonderland.

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation againlooked forward to watching this one.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation agains looking forward to watching this one.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.

I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.

The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.

"I'm right on time.

"

"Your time is up"

"It will be a race against Time"

"It will be a race against Ttime"

I like these jokes.

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