April 17, 2022
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".
It is the sequel film Alice in Wonderland.
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.
"I'm right on time."
"Your time is up"
"It will be a race against Time"
I like these jokes.
Alice Through the Looking Glass
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".
It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.
If something is a sequel, it is a 'sequel to' something else that came first.
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.
If you say 'again' it means you did that thing before and you are now doing it a second time. If this is your first time watching this film you would just say you watched with anticipation
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.
"I'm right on time.
"Your time is up"
"It will be a race against Time"
I like these jokes.
Alice Through the Looking Glass
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".
What you've written is correct but you could also say "I watched" or "I saw the film"
It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation againlooked forward to watching this one.
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.
"I'm right on time.
"
"Your time is up"
"It will be a race against Time"
I like these jokes.
Feedback
Good writing! Your writing is improving :)
Alice Through the Looking Glass
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".
It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.
"I'm right on time.
"Your time is up"
"It will be a race against Ttime"
I like these jokes.
Alice Through the Looking Glass
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".
It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland.
you could also just say "It is the sequel to Alice in Wonderland" because you have already said previously you "saw" it so your reader will know it is a film
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation agains looking forward to watching this one.
Your sentence is entirely correct but it sounds overly formal, this is a less formal way you could say it
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.
"I'm right on time.
"Your time is up"
"It will be a race against Time"
I like these jokes.
Feedback
This is very good writing!
The only big change I made was about sounding less formal, the way you've written it is too formal even to speak to your boss, it sounds like how I image the queen would talk. However, it was not an incorrect sentence so don't worry about that :)
Alice Through the Looking Glass |
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass". Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass". What you've written is correct but you could also say "I watched" or "I saw the film"
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It is the sequel film Alice in Wonderland. It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland. It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland. you could also just say "It is the sequel to Alice in Wonderland" because you have already said previously you "saw" it so your reader will know it is a film
It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland. If something is a sequel, it is a 'sequel to' something else that came first.
It is the sequel to the film Alice in Wonderland. |
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again. I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I wa Your sentence is entirely correct but it sounds overly formal, this is a less formal way you could say it
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation If you say 'again' it means you did that thing before and you are now doing it a second time. If this is your first time watching this film you would just say you watched with anticipation
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation |
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting. |
"I'm right on time. |
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"Your time is up" |
"It will be a race against Time" "It will be a race against |
I like these jokes. |
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