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Jack

March 13, 2022

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About My Job

I was born in a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way is to study hard to do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

At the age of fifteen, in the high school entrance examination, I won first place in my middle school. I had two choices at that time. One was to go to a key provincial high school, the other was to go to a technical secondary school.

Going to a secondary school means I already get work assigned by our government. The only thing I need to do is study in the school for three years.

If I go to high school, I still have to take the college entrance examination. If I fail the exam, I still need to go back to my village to be a farmer. I finally chose to go to a technical secondary school.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which is about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

The name of my work unit was called Jiashan County agricultural machinery training class and I worked there for four years.

In 1989, I was transferred to my home city. My new work unit was the same as that in Jiashan County.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which is called agricultural machinery technology extension station.

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but its name has already changed to "agricultural mechanization technical school".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit "agricultural radio and television school". If there is no other special case, I will retire from this work unit.

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has already become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

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I was born into a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers.

IfBecause I doidn't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way islive my entire life as a farmer, I had to study hard toand do well in school, so that the governmentI would be assign meed government work.

At the age of fifteen, in theI sat for high school entrance examination, Iand won first place in my middle school.

At that time, I had two choices at that time.

Going to a secondary school means I already get workthat work will be assigned by ourthe government.

The only thing I needed to do iswas to study in the school for three years.

If I chose to go to high school, I would still have to take the college entrance examination.

If I had failed theat exam, I still neewould still have had to go back to my village to be a farmer.

I finally chose to go to a technical secondary school.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which is about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

The name of my work unit was called "Jiashan County aAgricultural mMachinery tTraining cClass", and I worked there for four years.

I would usually capitalise names.

My new work unit there was the same as that in Jiashan County.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which is called a, known as the "Agricultural mMachinery tTechnology eExtension sStation".

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but its name has alreadythe name of which had by then been changed to "aAgricultural mMechanization tTechnical sSchool".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit, the "aAgricultural rRadio and tTelevision sSchool".

If there is no other special case, I willnothing unusual happens, I expect to retire from this work unit.

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has alreadynow become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

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Jack

March 14, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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Jack

March 14, 2022

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If I had failed theat exam, I still neewould still have had to go back to my village to be a farmer.

Could you please tell me the usage of “I would still have had to…” ? Thank you very much.

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AndrewW

March 14, 2022

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It's quite tricky to express this, because you are talking about things that might have happened in the past. Even after a lot of practice, I still need to think carefully. What I wrote above, was what looked correct to me, while changing your words as little as possible.
Perhaps a clearer way to express the idea would be:
If I had failed that exam, it would have been necessary for me to go back to my village, and become a farmer.
An alternative way of writing the this sentence is:
Had I failed that exam, ...

About My Job

I was born into a farmer'sing family, andwhere all the people in my village were all farmers.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way out is to study hard and to do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

At the age of fifteen, in the high school entrance examination, I won first place in my middle school.

I had two choices at that time.

One was to go to a key provincial high school, the other was to go to a technical secondary school.

Going to a secondary school meanst I already gethad work assigned by our government.

The only thing I need to do iswas to study in the school for three years.

If I go to high school, I still have to take the college entrance examination.

If I failed the exam, I stillwould need to go back to my village to be a farmer.

I finally chose to go to a technical secondary school.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which is about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

The name of my work unit was called Jiashan County agricultural machinery training class and I worked there for four years.

In 1989, I was transferred to my home city.

My new work unit was the same as that in Jiashan County.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which is called agricultural machinery technology extension station.

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but itsthe name has already changed to "agricultural mechanization technical school".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit, "agricultural radio and television school".

If there isare no other special casechanges, I will retire from this work unit.

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has already become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

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Jack

March 14, 2022

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Thank you very much.

I was born into a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way is to study hard toand do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

At the age of fifteen, in the high school entrance examination, I won first place in my middle school.

I had two choices at that time.

One was to go to a key provincial high school, t. The other was to go to a technical secondary school.

Going to a secondary school means I alreadywill get work assigned by our government.

The only thing I need to do is study inat the school for three years.

If I go to high school, I still have to take the college entrance examination.

If I fail the exam, I stwill need to go back to my village to be a farmer.

I finally chose to go to a technical secondary school.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which is about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

The name of my work unit was called "Jiashan County agricultural machinery training class" and I worked there for four years.

In 1989, I was transferred to my home city.

My new work unit was the same as that in Jiashan County.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which is called agricultural machinery technology extension station.

If there is no other special case, I will retire from this work unit.

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has already become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

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Jack

March 13, 2022

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Thank you very much.

About My Job

I was born in (to) a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers as well.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way is to study hard toand do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

At the age of fifteen, in the high school entrance examination, I won first place in my middle school.

I had two choices at that time.

One was to go to a key provincial high school, and the other was to go to a technical secondary school.

Going to a secondary school means I alreadyt that I would get work assigned by our government.

or: Going to a secondary school meant that the government would (definitely) assign me work.

The only thing I need to do is to study in the school for three years.

If I go to high school, I still would have to take the college entrance examination.

If I fail the exam, I still needwould then have to go back to my village to be a farmer.

I finallyn the end I chose to go to a technical secondary school.

WhenOnce I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which iwas about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

The name of my work unit was called Jiashan County agricultural machinery training class and I worked there for four years.

In 1989, I was transferred to my home city.

My new work unit was the same as that in Jiashan County.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which iwas called agricultural machinery technology extension station.

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but its name hwas already changed to "agricultural mechanization technical school".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit known as the "agricultural radio and television school".

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has alreadythat has now become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

Jack's avatar
Jack

March 13, 2022

0

Thank you very much

About My Job

I was born in a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers.

I was born in (to) a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers as well.

I was born into a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers.

I was born into a farmer'sing family, andwhere all the people in my village were all farmers.

I was born into a farmer's family, and all the people in my village were all farmers.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way is to study hard to do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way is to study hard toand do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way is to study hard toand do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

If I don't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way out is to study hard and to do well in school so that the government would assign me work.

IfBecause I doidn't want to be a farmer for my entire life, the only way islive my entire life as a farmer, I had to study hard toand do well in school, so that the governmentI would be assign meed government work.

At the age of fifteen, in the high school entrance examination, I won first place in my middle school.

At the age of fifteen, in theI sat for high school entrance examination, Iand won first place in my middle school.

I had two choices at that time.

At that time, I had two choices at that time.

One was to go to a key provincial high school, the other was to go to a technical secondary school.

One was to go to a key provincial high school, and the other was to go to a technical secondary school.

One was to go to a key provincial high school, t. The other was to go to a technical secondary school.

Going to a secondary school means I already get work assigned by our government.

Going to a secondary school means I alreadyt that I would get work assigned by our government.

Going to a secondary school means I alreadywill get work assigned by our government.

Going to a secondary school meanst I already gethad work assigned by our government.

Going to a secondary school means I already get workthat work will be assigned by ourthe government.

The only thing I need to do is study in the school for three years.

The only thing I need to do is to study in the school for three years.

The only thing I need to do is study inat the school for three years.

The only thing I need to do iswas to study in the school for three years.

The only thing I needed to do iswas to study in the school for three years.

If I go to high school, I still have to take the college entrance examination.

If I go to high school, I still would have to take the college entrance examination.

If I chose to go to high school, I would still have to take the college entrance examination.

If I fail the exam, I still need to go back to my village to be a farmer.

If I fail the exam, I still needwould then have to go back to my village to be a farmer.

If I fail the exam, I stwill need to go back to my village to be a farmer.

If I failed the exam, I stillwould need to go back to my village to be a farmer.

If I had failed theat exam, I still neewould still have had to go back to my village to be a farmer.

I finally chose to go to a technical secondary school.

I finallyn the end I chose to go to a technical secondary school.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which is about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

WhenOnce I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which iwas about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which is about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to a county in my province, which is about 200 kilometers away from my hometown.

The name of my work unit was called Jiashan County agricultural machinery training class and I worked there for four years.

The name of my work unit was called "Jiashan County agricultural machinery training class" and I worked there for four years.

The name of my work unit was called Jiashan County agricultural machinery training class and I worked there for four years.

The name of my work unit was called "Jiashan County aAgricultural mMachinery tTraining cClass", and I worked there for four years.

In 1989, I was transferred to my home city.

My new work unit was the same as that in Jiashan County.

My new work unit there was the same as that in Jiashan County.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which is called agricultural machinery technology extension station.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which iwas called agricultural machinery technology extension station.

In 1997, I was transferred to another work unit which is called a, known as the "Agricultural mMachinery tTechnology eExtension sStation".

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but its name has already changed to "agricultural mechanization technical school".

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but its name hwas already changed to "agricultural mechanization technical school".

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but itsthe name has already changed to "agricultural mechanization technical school".

In 2016, I was transferred to my second work unit, but its name has alreadythe name of which had by then been changed to "aAgricultural mMechanization tTechnical sSchool".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit "agricultural radio and television school".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit known as the "agricultural radio and television school".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit, "agricultural radio and television school".

In 2020, I was transferred to my current work unit, the "aAgricultural rRadio and tTelevision sSchool".

If there is no other special case, I will retire from this work unit.

If there isare no other special casechanges, I will retire from this work unit.

If there is no other special case, I willnothing unusual happens, I expect to retire from this work unit.

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has already become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has alreadythat has now become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

Apart from my first work unit, the other three work units belong to the same county, which has alreadynow become a municipal district of Fuyang now.

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