Hello Chris, thank you again for correcting my journals. If I don't remember it wrong, this is the second time you correct them.
I have been practicing writing since July 2020 because I thought people could speak well if they wrote well, although it turned out that I was wrong.
I have written almost 900 essays, about 260,000 words so far. During this journey, many teachers helped me and some of them even helped me so many times.
You are the teacher who I remember deeply and clearly at the first correction, in which I saw many brackets and I suddenly realized where I should go in writing.
In previous essays, to practice writing, I always tried to write more. I tried to use many different prepositions to link words and phrases together to make sentences as longer as I could.
When I first saw your corrections, I suddenly knew that all the contents in the brackets could be deleted without changing the meaning of the original sentences.
In the following writings, I will try to be more concise. In fact, I have tried to do it since the first time you corrected me.
Thank you very much, and best wishes always.