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Jack

Jan 13

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Hello Chris, thank you again for correcting my journals. If I don't remember it wrong, this is the second time you correct them.

I have been practicing writing since July 2020 because I thought people could speak well if they wrote well, although it turned out that I was wrong.

I have written almost 900 essays, about 260,000 words so far. During this journey, many teachers helped me and some of them even helped me so many times.

You are the teacher who I remember deeply and clearly at the first correction, in which I saw many brackets and I suddenly realized where I should go in writing.

In previous essays, to practice writing, I always tried to write more. I tried to use many different prepositions to link words and phrases together to make sentences as longer as I could.

When I first saw your corrections, I suddenly knew that all the contents in the brackets could be deleted without changing the meaning of the original sentences.

In the following writings, I will try to be more concise. In fact, I have tried to do it since the first time you corrected me.

Thank you very much, and best wishes always.

Sincerely
Your student
Jack

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Hello Chris, thank you again for correcting my journals.

Hello Chris, t. Thank you again for correcting my journals.

If I don't remember it wrong, this is the second time you correct them.

If I don't remember it wrongcorrectly, this is the second time youthat you have corrected them.

If I don't remember it wrong, this is the second time you have corrected them.

You could also say "if I remember correctly, ..."
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I have been practicing writing since July 2020 because I thought people could speak well if they wrote well, although it turned out that I was wrong.

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I have written almost 900 essays, about 260,000 words so far.

During this journey, many teachers helped me and some of them even helped me so many times.

During this journey, many teachers helped me, and some of them even helped me so many times.

During this journey, many teachers helped me and some of them even helped me so manymultiple times.

You are the teacher who I remember deeply and clearly at the first correction, in which I saw many brackets and I suddenly realized where I should go in writing.

You are the teacher who I remember deeply and clearly at the first correction, in which I saw many brackets and I suddenly realized where I should go in writing.

I clearly remember your first correction, in which I saw many brackets. It made me realize where I should go in writing.

You are the teacher who I remember most deeply and clearly atfrom the first correction, in which I saw many brackets and I suddenly realized where I should go in writing.

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In previous essays, to practice writing, I always tried to write more.

I tried to use many different prepositions to link words and phrases together to make sentences as longer as I could.

I tried to use many different prepositions to link words and phrases together to make sentences as longer as I could.

I tried to use many different prepositions to link words and phrases together to make sentences as longer as I could.

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When I first saw your corrections, I suddenly knew that all the contents in the brackets could be deleted without changing the meaning of the original sentences.

In the following writings, I will try to be more concise.

In the(my) following writings, I will try to be more concise.

In themy following writings, I will try to be more concise.

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In fact, I have tried to do it since the first time you corrected me.

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Thank you very much, and best wishes always.

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Sincerely

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Your student

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Jack

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