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Ducky

Nov. 29, 2021

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A Quiet Neighborhood

My neighborhood is very peaceful. The streets don't have very much car moviment, and there are some streets where only can go people, bikes and skates. We are near a library, three little supermarkets, two farmacies, a bakery, a fish shop and some fruit shops. Also, there are several restaurants, with meal from several countries. Not very far, there are a theatre and a church, too. If you like, you can walk a little along to the beach. Also, you can go for the bike lane in some streets, of course with a bike. In this neighborhood you have the possibility to see some chimneys. They remember the industrial past of this city.

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A Quiet Neighborhood

My neighborhood is very peaceful.

The streets don't have very much car moviment, and there are some streets where only can go people, bikes and skates.

The streets don't have very much car movimenttraffic, and there are some streets where only can go people, bikepedestrians cand skates go.

Here, you could also say "there are some streets where only people, bikes, and skaters can go" but "pedestrians" sounds more natural. The verb phrase "can go" will go after the subject "pedestrians".

We are near a library, three little supermarkets, two farmacies, a bakery, a fish shop and some fruit shops.

We are near a library, three little supermarkets, two fpharmacies, a bakery, a fish shop and some fruit shops.

Also, there are several restaurants, with meal from several countries.

Also, tThere are also several restaurants, with meals from severaldifferent countries.

Not very far, there are a theatre and a church, too.

Not very farfar away, there are a theatre and a church, too.

If you like, you can walk a little alongshort distance to the beach.

Here, it sounds more natural to say "walk a short distance", although your meaning was understood in the original sentence.

Also, you can go for the bike lane in some streets, of course with a bike.

Also, you can go forYou can also use the bike lane in some streets, of course with a bike of course.

It is more natural to use "also" after the subject and auxiliary verb (I can ALSO...) rather than at the beginning of the sentence.

In this neighborhood you have the possibility to see some chimneys.

In this neighborhood you have the possibility tomay see some chimneys.

"Have the possibility to" is technically correct, but sounds unnatural.

They remember the industrial past of this city.

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Ducky

Dec. 1, 2021

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Thanks a lot. Your comments in corrections are very useful.

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Ducky

Nov. 30, 2021

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Thanks.

A Quiet Neighborhood

My neighborhood is very peaceful.

The streets don't have very much car moviment, and there are some streets where only can go people, bikes and skates.

The streets don't have very much car movimenttraffic, and there are some streets where only can go people, bikepedestrians cand skates go.

We are near a library, three little supermarkets, two farmacies, a bakery, a fish shop and some fruit shops.

We are near a library, three little supermarkets, two fpharmacies, a bakery, a fish shop and some fruit shops.

Also, there are several restaurants, with meal from several countries.

Also, tThere are also several restaurants, with meals from severaldifferent countries.

Not very far, there are a theatre and a church, too.

Not very farfar away, there are a theatre and a church, too.

If you like, you can walk a little along to the beach.

If you like, you can walk a little alongshort distance to the beach.

Also, you can go for the bike lane in some streets, of course with a bike.

Also, you can go forYou can also use the bike lane in some streets, of course with a bike of course.

In this neighborhood you have the possibility to see some chimneys.

In this neighborhood you have the possibility tomay see some chimneys.

They remember the industrial past of this city.

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