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BlackGlasses

Dec. 24, 2022

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If you would be able to ask to yourself a question in ten years from now, what would you ask?

At first, I was thinkg about asking: are you happy? but the question probably would be like "yes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions too." So I realised that maybe that's not the best question to ask. Instead, I would like to learn and grow from my mistakes.
I would like to focus not in how I feel but how I react.
That's the reason why I would ask: "what have you learnt in these ten years?"

So, what question would you ask to yourself in ten years from now?

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If you would bere able to ask to yourself a question in ten years from now, what would you ask?

This is subjunctive tense.

At first, I was thinking about asking:, are you happy?

but the questionThe answer, however, probably would be like, "yYes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions, too."

So I realised that maybe that's not the best question to ask.

Instead, I would like to learn and grow from my mistakes.

I would like to focus not ion how I feel but how I react.

That's the reason why I would ask: instead, "wWhat have you learnt in these past ten years?

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So, what question would you ask to yourself in ten years from now?

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The same question! Good thinking and well done!

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 29, 2022

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Thank you so much again, Mari.
Have a nice day!

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If you wcould be able to ask to yourself a question in ten years from now, what would you ask?

Reading this back yes it can be misinterpreted and it isn’t the best sentence, however this has become the norm way to say this sentence (so I recommend it to you!)

At first, I was thinkg about asking: When thinking about this question, I first thought asking myself, ‘are you happy?’.

bBut the questionanswer probably would be something like "yes, sometimes I am, but sometimes I feel other not-so-happy emotions, too."

‘ Not-so…’ is a common colloquial phrase

“She was not-so early.” (AKA she was late)

It is like a euphemism I believe, yes! I can give you more examples if you need!

Instead, by that phase/time of my life, I would like to be actively learning and growing from my mistakes.

I would like to focus not ion how I feel but how I react.

That's the reason why , if given the opportunity, I would ask: "what have you learnt in these ten years?”.

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So, what question would you ask to yourself in ten years from now?

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I would ask myself if I’ve travelled the world, am fluent in at least a few languages and have moved out and am in my dream career ! Well done Li, amazing work!!

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 29, 2022

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Thanks for correcting me! I hope you travel the world and become fluent in several languages. :)
Have a nice day!

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If you would bere able to ask to yourself a question in ten years from now, what would you ask?

At first, I was thinking about asking: are you happy?

but the questionanswer would probably would be like "yes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions too."

So I realised that maybe that's not the best question to ask.

Instead, I would like to learn and grow from my mistakes.

I would like to focus not ion how I feel but how I react.

That's the reason why erefore I would ask: "what have you learnt in these ten years?

"learned" is more common in the US.

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So, what question would you ask to yourself in ten years from now?

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What a great question! Good writing!

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 29, 2022

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Thank you very much for correcting me again. :)
Have a nice day!

If you would bere able to ask to yourself a question in ten years from now, what would you ask?

At first, I was thinkgthought about asking: are you happy?

but the questionanswer probably would be like "yes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions too."

here naturally i might say "yes, sometimes I am, but not always." meaning you feel other emotions too.

So I realised that maybe that's not the best question to ask.

Instead, I would like to learn and grow from my mistakes.

I would like to focus not in how I feel, but how I react.

That's the reason why I would ask:, "what have you learnted in these ten years?

learnt is correct i think but it's weird to use IMO

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nice job!

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BlackGlasses

Jan. 4, 2023

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Thank you sommuch! 😊

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BlackGlasses

Jan. 4, 2023

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Thank you so very much! 😊

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If you would be able to ask to yourself a question in(the you ten years from now)/(yourself ten years from now) a question, what would you ask?

At first, I was thinkg about asking: "are you happy?,"

but the question probably would be likanswer would probably be "yes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions too."

So I realised that maybe that's not the best question to ask.

Instead, I would like to learn and grow from my mistakes.

I would like to focus not ion how I feel but how I react.

That's the reason why I would ask: "wWhat have you learnt/learned in these ten years?

Depending on what type of English you are studying, the past tense of "learn" is different. I am from the US, so "learned" is used, but it seems that people from the UK use "learnt."

So, what question would you ask to (yourself inten years)/(the you ten years) from now?

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Good topic! If I would probably ask something similar: "What advice would you give me now that you wish you have gotten then?" But honestly, I would rather not ask anything at all. I want to just have life come at me unexpectedly, even if some of it may not be all sunshine and rainbows.

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 29, 2022

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What an interesting perspective! Thanks for these corrections. :)

If you wcould be able to ask to yourself a question in ten years from now, what would you ask?

At first, I was thinkgthought about asking:, are you happy?

but the questionThe answer, however, probably would be like, "yYes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions, too."

I would like to focus not ion how I feel but how I react.

That's the reason why I would ask:, "wWhat have you learnt in these ten years?".

"

So, what question would you ask to yourself in ten years from now?

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Great!

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 29, 2022

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I'm grateful for these amazing corrections! Thank you very much and have a nice day.

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but the question probably would be like "yes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions too."

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but the questionThe answer, however, probably would be like, "yYes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions, too."

but the questionanswer would probably would be like "yes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions too."

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but the questionanswer probably would be like "yes, sometimes I am, but I feel other emotions too."

So I realised that maybe that's not the best question to ask.

Instead, I would like to learn and grow from my mistakes.

Instead, by that phase/time of my life, I would like to be actively learning and growing from my mistakes.

I would like to focus not in how I feel but how I react.

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So, what question would you ask to yourself in ten years from now?

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