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April 1, 2022

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A proposal: Website improvements (C1 CAE)

A proposal: Website improvements

Your company has a website, but it is old and not very user-friendly, so the director has sent you the following email:

We have received a number of complaints about our website from customers and the number of visitors to the website has fallen in recent months. Please could you draw up a proposal outlining your suggestions for how we can improve the site and I will share it at the next board meeting.

Write your proposal

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How to improve navigation in our website

Introduction
Our company is extremely dependent on a good website, as most of our sales are done via online. Moreover, we are specialised at selling technological products, so it is needed an urgent change in website's structure.

Problems using the website
There are two main issues that people are complaining about: the page lacks a clear structure and there are too many ads, which often hide menus and picture of our products.
As regards the first problem, potential customers have difficulties to find the kind of product that they want, because of misleading menus, as well as a wrong indexation of the product in the correct category. For example, one of our clients complaints about finding a laptop in the gaming field.

As to the second issue, there is no need to having such a number of ads in our site, especially considering both the drop in client that we are actually suffering, and low incomes coming from ads.

Suggestions to improve the website
In order to avoid clients to get lost in our page, we need to reprogramme it, looking for any wrong indexation or related mistake coming from the html source code. It means hiring a good technical programmer, unlike the last time. The main investment in this company should be focused on making a good impression to the customer by means of our page.

Regarding advertising, incomes from this are pretty low, so why should we keep on this way? The best solution would be remove it all, since our main input comes from clients not ads.

If these suggestions are taken in place it will be able for us to turn the situation around for the better.


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A proposal: Website improvements (C1 CAE)

A proposal: Website improvements

Your company has a website, but it is old and not very user-friendly, so the director has sent you the following email:

We have received a number of complaints about our website from customers and the number of visitors to the website has fallen in recent months.

Please could you draw up a proposal outlining your suggestions for how we can improve the site and I will share it at the next board meeting.

Write your proposal.

(What could I do to make it sound more natural? )

How to improve navigation in our website:

Introduction

Our company is extremely dependent on a good website, as most of our sales are dcone viaducted online.

Moreover, we are specialised at selling technological products, so it is needed an urgenta change into the website's structure is urgently needed.

Problems using the website.

There are two main issues that people are complaining about: the page lacks a clear structure and there are too many ads, which often hide menus and pictures of our products.

AsIn regards to the first problem, potential customers have difficulties to find the kind of product that they want, because of misleading menus, as well as a wrong indexation of the product in the correctmappings of products to categoryies.

For example, one of our clients complaints about finding a laptop in the gaming fieldarea.

As to the second issue, there is no need to having such a huge number of ads ion our site, especially considering both the drop in clients that we are actualcurrently suffering, and low incomes coming from ads.

false friend: actualmente != actually

Suggestions to improve the website.

In order to avoid clients to get lost in our page, we need to reprogrammedesign it, looking for any wrong indexationmappings or related mistakes coming from the html source code.

It means hiring a good technical programmer, unlike the last time.

The main investment in this company should be focused on making a good impression ton the customer by means of our pagsite.

Regarding advertising, incomes from this are pretty low, so why should we keep ondoing this way?

The best solution would be remove it alltogether, since our main input comes from clients, not ads.

If these suggestions are taken in placeproposals are implemented it will be apossible for us to turn theis situation around for the better.

isaac's avatar
isaac

April 1, 2022

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Thank you so much diggn for your corrections.

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diggn

April 1, 2022

0

Thank you so much diggn for your corrections.

De nada, fue un placer. :)

A proposal: Website improvements (C1 CAE)

A proposal: Website improvements

Your company has a website, but it is old and not very user-friendly, so the director has sent you the following email:

We have received a number of complaints about our website from customers and the number of visitors to the website has fallen in recent months.

Please could you draw up a proposal outlining your suggestions for how we can improve the site and I will share it at the next board meeting.

Write your proposal

Write your proposal.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

(What could I do to make it sound more natural? )

(What could I do to make it sound more natural? )

How to improve navigation in our website

How to improve navigation in our website:

Introduction

Our company is extremely dependent on a good website, as most of our sales are done via online.

Our company is extremely dependent on a good website, as most of our sales are dcone viaducted online.

Moreover, we are specialised at selling technological products, so it is needed an urgent change in website's structure.

Moreover, we are specialised at selling technological products, so it is needed an urgenta change into the website's structure is urgently needed.

Problems using the website

Problems using the website.

There are two main issues that people are complaining about: the page lacks a clear structure and there are too many ads, which often hide menus and picture of our products.

There are two main issues that people are complaining about: the page lacks a clear structure and there are too many ads, which often hide menus and pictures of our products.

As regards the first problem, potential customers have difficulties to find the kind of product that they want, because of misleading menus, as well as a wrong indexation of the product in the correct category.

AsIn regards to the first problem, potential customers have difficulties to find the kind of product that they want, because of misleading menus, as well as a wrong indexation of the product in the correctmappings of products to categoryies.

For example, one of our clients complaints about finding a laptop in the gaming field.

For example, one of our clients complaints about finding a laptop in the gaming fieldarea.

As to the second issue, there is no need to having such a number of ads in our site, especially considering both the drop in client that we are actually suffering, and low incomes coming from ads.

As to the second issue, there is no need to having such a huge number of ads ion our site, especially considering both the drop in clients that we are actualcurrently suffering, and low incomes coming from ads.

Suggestions to improve the website

Suggestions to improve the website.

In order to avoid clients to get lost in our page, we need to reprogramme it, looking for any wrong indexation or related mistake coming from the html source code.

In order to avoid clients to get lost in our page, we need to reprogrammedesign it, looking for any wrong indexationmappings or related mistakes coming from the html source code.

It means hiring a good technical programmer, unlike the last time.

The main investment in this company should be focused on making a good impression to the customer by means of our page.

The main investment in this company should be focused on making a good impression ton the customer by means of our pagsite.

Regarding advertising, incomes from this are pretty low, so why should we keep on this way?

Regarding advertising, incomes from this are pretty low, so why should we keep ondoing this way?

The best solution would be remove it all, since our main input comes from clients not ads.

The best solution would be remove it alltogether, since our main input comes from clients, not ads.

If these suggestions are taken in place it will be able for us to turn the situation around for the better.

If these suggestions are taken in placeproposals are implemented it will be apossible for us to turn theis situation around for the better.

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