June 5, 2021
6月5日话题：如果你能穿越时空，你会回到过去还是未来？
直接回答：未来！
我对未来的世界十分好奇。一百年，五百年，一千年，以后的人类会遇到什么？
不过五十年前，电脑是一个不为人知的新概念。没有人能想象在现在世界上的发达国家，人个个都有自己的小电脑（就是指我们的智能手机）。当时，甚至互联网的快速发展是一件不可思议的事。在未来的世界，我们会发明创造什么奇妙的技术？人类会不会渐渐地跟机器融合，变成科幻一样的机器人？人类会不会统统都沉浸在虚拟现实的世界吗？
目前，虽然世界有很多问题，与历史相比，这是一个相对和平的时代。以后还会这样吗？世界上的国家会越努力合作，还是会越分开越独立？中国会征服世界成为领先的超级大国吗？世界会发生什么核战争，什么会导致第三次世界大战？
人类能不能解决全球变暖的问题？人类会不会被某些灾害毁灭（比如，一个无法治疗的病毒）？人类能否成功地生活在火星上吗？
无数问题！当我想到未来时，我觉得自己很渺小。对人类的未来，我既乐观又悲观。希望人类能好好地活下去，更加照顾好世界的环境，不要太快被消灭。
If you could time travel, would you go into the past or the future? // My direct answer: the future! I'm very curious about what the world will be like in the future. In 100 years, 500 years, 1000 years, what will humanity encounter?
Just fifty years ago, the computer was a new concept that barely anyone had heard of. No one could have imagined then that in today's developed countries, each person has a small computer (our smartphones). At that time, the rapid development of the Internet was unthinkable. What incredible technology will we invent in the future? Will humans gradually merge with machines and become science fiction-like robots? Will humans become utterly immersed in VR (virtual reality) worlds?
At present, although there are many problems in the world, when we compare it with history, this is a relatively peaceful period of time. Will it be like this in the future? Will the countries of the world become more collaborative, or will they become more isolated and independent? Will China conquer the world and become the leading superpower? Will nuclear war happen in the future, and if so, what will lead to World War III?
Can humanity solve the problem of global warming? Will humanity be destroyed by certain disasters (for example, an incurable virus)? Can man successfully live on Mars?
Countless questions! When I think about the future, I feel insignificant. I'm simultaneously optimistic and pessimistic about the future of humanity. I hope that humans can live well, take better care of the world's environment, and not be wiped out too soon.
6月5日话题：如果你能穿越时空，你会回到过去还是未来？
直接回答：未来！
我对未来的世界十分好奇。
一百年，五百年，一千年，以后的人类会遇到什么？
不过五十年前，电脑是一个不为人知的新概念。
没有人能想象在现在世界上的发达国家，人个个都有自己的小电脑（就是指我们的智能手机）。
当时，甚至互联网的快速发展是一件不可思议的事。
在未来的世界，我们会发明创造什么奇妙的技术？
人类会不会渐渐地跟机器融合，变成科幻一样的机器人？
人类会不会统统都沉浸在虚拟现实的世界吗？
目前，虽然世界有很多问题，与历史相比，这是一个相对和平的时代。
以后还会这样吗？
世界上的国家会越努力合作，还是会越分开越独立？
中国会征服世界成为领先的超级大国吗？
世界会发生什么核战争，什么会导致第三次世界大战？
人类能不能解决全球变暖的问题？
人类会不会被某些灾害毁灭（比如，一个无法治疗的病毒）？
人类能否成功地生活在火星上吗？
无数问题！
当我想到未来时，我觉得自己很渺小。
对人类的未来，我既乐观又悲观。
希望人类能好好地活下去，更加照顾好世界的环境，不要太快被消灭。
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之所以一个字没改是因为我的观点是只要没有基本的错误而且读者能理解作者的意思就不要轻易改动它，否则会让作者不知所从。至于需要进一步改善提高，那还是让作者慢慢领悟吧，这是需要时间的。
我对十分好奇未来的世界十分好奇会如何。
@"what the world will be like in the future"——"will be like" wasn't translated
①——It might translate to [会【怎样/如何】发展]——*[发展] is unnecessary, up to you*
”对未来的世界 [会【怎样/如何】发展] 十分好奇“
②——or replace to some nouns（There are approximate meaning in the sentance）[模样] [图景]
"对未来世界的 [模样/图景] 十分好奇"
@If we choose ①，it will be “我对未来的世界会如何十分好奇。”
The meaning of the original English text is all in place， but we can make it more smooth.
END：“我十分好奇未来的世界会如何。”
Tips: There are small differences in these usages, just up to your focus on what kind of feeling, static image, or dynamic development process.
目前，虽然世界有很多问题，但与历史相比，这是一个相对和平的时代。
世界上的国家会越努力合作，还是会越分开越孤离独立？
@”分开“ is a verb in Chinese ，so ”越分开越独立“ is more like to describe the cause（分开） and
effect（独立），not expressing juxtaposition adjectives.
@So maybe we need to choose other words. Then I check the words in an E to C dictionary.
Contextual，the similar results of "isolated” are [使孤立][使脱离][使隔离][使离析]，as we can see.
any characters in these words all contain the feeling of "isolated".
@Then we can try to recombine them——but first, turning back to "越分开越独立”，we remain "独
立“（revise the original text as little as possible）.
（And from my own habits，I like to use different Chinese characters（same feeling）to write.）
@Deleted the repetitive characters ”立“，There still be [孤][脱][离][隔][析].
（Skip some unnecessary explaination）
@After some thoughts on the word groups, we can select [孤离][孤隔][离隔][隔离][脱离][脱隔]（I
can hardly recognize these Chinese characters (＠_＠;)）
*There are small differences in these usages, just up to your focus point.*
@From my point of view，[孤离] puts more emphasis on a gradual process of leaving.
*And simply provide some feeling of these words.
①more oral description：[隔离][脱离]
②more written description：[孤离][孤隔][离隔][脱隔]
③seldom：[离隔][脱隔] *
So，I prefer to change the sentence to“还是会越孤离独立？”
*In Chinese，we can merge words into one body，such as Chinese poetry.*
END：“世界上的国家会越努力合作，还是会越孤离独立？”
Tips：We can surely stop in this step ，the sentence is full.
But at last, "努力合作"(more oral) and"孤离独立" is not balance enough.
Therefore, I'd like to suggest [携手并进].（still unnecessary，up to you）
人类能否成功地生活在火星上吗？
“能否” and“吗” are repetitive.
①“能否”（more written）——“人类能否成功地生活在火星上？”
②“吗”（more oral）——“人类能成功地生活在火星上吗？”
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6月5日话题：如果你能穿越时空，你会回到过去还是未来？ |
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直接回答：未来！ |
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我对未来的世界十分好奇。 我 @"what the world will be like in the future"——"will be like" wasn't translated
①——It might translate to [会【怎样/如何】发展]——*[发展] is unnecessary, up to you* ”对未来的世界 [会【怎样/如何】发展] 十分好奇“ ②——or replace to some nouns（There are approximate meaning in the sentance）[模样] [图景] "对未来世界的 [模样/图景] 十分好奇" @If we choose ①，it will be “我对未来的世界会如何十分好奇。” The meaning of the original English text is all in place， but we can make it more smooth. END：“我十分好奇未来的世界会如何。” Tips: There are small differences in these usages, just up to your focus on what kind of feeling, static image, or dynamic development process. |
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一百年，五百年，一千年，以后的人类会遇到什么？ |
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不过五十年前，电脑是一个不为人知的新概念。 |
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没有人能想象在现在世界上的发达国家，人个个都有自己的小电脑（就是指我们的智能手机）。 |
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当时，甚至互联网的快速发展是一件不可思议的事。 |
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在未来的世界，我们会发明创造什么奇妙的技术？ |
|
人类会不会渐渐地跟机器融合，变成科幻一样的机器人？ |
|
人类会不会统统都沉浸在虚拟现实的世界吗？ |
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目前，虽然世界有很多问题，与历史相比，这是一个相对和平的时代。 目前，虽然世界有很多问题，但与历史相比，这是一个相对和平的时代。 |
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以后还会这样吗？ |
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世界上的国家会越努力合作，还是会越分开越独立？ 世界上的国家会越努力合作，还是会越 @”分开“ is a verb in Chinese ，so ”越分开越独立“ is more like to describe the cause（分开） and
effect（独立），not expressing juxtaposition adjectives. @So maybe we need to choose other words. Then I check the words in an E to C dictionary. Contextual，the similar results of "isolated” are [使孤立][使脱离][使隔离][使离析]，as we can see. any characters in these words all contain the feeling of "isolated". @Then we can try to recombine them——but first, turning back to "越分开越独立”，we remain "独 立“（revise the original text as little as possible）. （And from my own habits，I like to use different Chinese characters（same feeling）to write.） @Deleted the repetitive characters ”立“，There still be [孤][脱][离][隔][析]. （Skip some unnecessary explaination） @After some thoughts on the word groups, we can select [孤离][孤隔][离隔][隔离][脱离][脱隔]（I can hardly recognize these Chinese characters (＠_＠;)） *There are small differences in these usages, just up to your focus point.* @From my point of view，[孤离] puts more emphasis on a gradual process of leaving. *And simply provide some feeling of these words. ①more oral description：[隔离][脱离] ②more written description：[孤离][孤隔][离隔][脱隔] ③seldom：[离隔][脱隔] * So，I prefer to change the sentence to“还是会越孤离独立？” *In Chinese，we can merge words into one body，such as Chinese poetry.* END：“世界上的国家会越努力合作，还是会越孤离独立？” Tips：We can surely stop in this step ，the sentence is full. But at last, "努力合作"(more oral) and"孤离独立" is not balance enough. Therefore, I'd like to suggest [携手并进].（still unnecessary，up to you） |
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中国会征服世界成为领先的超级大国吗？ |
|
世界会发生什么核战争，什么会导致第三次世界大战？ |
|
人类能不能解决全球变暖的问题？ |
|
人类会不会被某些灾害毁灭（比如，一个无法治疗的病毒）？ |
|
人类能否成功地生活在火星上吗？ 人类能否成功地生活在火星上吗？ “能否” and“吗” are repetitive.
①“能否”（more written）——“人类能否成功地生活在火星上？” ②“吗”（more oral）——“人类能成功地生活在火星上吗？” |
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无数问题！ |
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当我想到未来时，我觉得自己很渺小。 |
|
对人类的未来，我既乐观又悲观。 |
|
希望人类能好好地活下去，更加照顾好世界的环境，不要太快被消灭。 |
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