July 4, 2021
I haven't written in a long time, but as I'd like to improve my writing skills, I'm going to tell you a bit about my day.
I woke up at eight o'clock as usual, had breakfast and studied for about three hours, which luckily was all the time I needed to study what I intended to and revise what I'd studied the previous days. I usually study way more, or at least I spend hours doing assignments. However, I've been feeling a lot of eye strain lately, so I thought I'd call it a day.
I had lunch with my family while we saw Luca, a Disney movie which almost made me cry. I enjoyed it a lot and had a good laugh. Later in the afternoon, I went to the supermarket with my little brother to buy some chocolate chips to make cookies. I love making cookies and chocolate chip cookies are my absolute favorite ones. I also watched Friends: The Reunion while having tea, so I naturally had a lot of fun.
I never take such long breaks from studying because I consider it a priority and I also like getting good grades, but I enjoyed the long break I took today.
7/4
I haven't written in a long time, but as I'd like to improve my writing skills, I'm going to tell you a bit about my day.
I woke up at eight o'clock as usual, had breakfast and studied for about three hours, which, luckily, was all the time I needed to study what I intended to and revisew what I'd studied the previousast few days.
I usually study way more, or at least I spend hoursmore time doing assignments.
However, I've been feeling a lot of eye strain lately, so I thought I'd call it a day.
I had lunch with my family while we saw Luca, a Disney movie which almost made me cry.
I enjoyed it a lot and had a good laugh.
Later in the afternoon, I went to the supermarket with my little brother to buy some chocolate chips to make cookies.
I love making cookies and chocolate chip cookies are my absolute favorite ones.
I also watched Friends: The Reunion while having tea, so I naturally I had a lot of fun.
I never take such long breaks from studying because I consider it a priority and I also like getting good grades, but I enjoyed the long break I took today.
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I haven't written in a long time, but as I'd like to improve my writing skills, I'm going to tell you a bit about my day. |
I woke up at eight o'clock as usual, had breakfast and studied for about three hours, which luckily was all the time I needed to study what I intended to and revise what I'd studied the previous days. I woke up at eight o'clock as usual, had breakfast and studied for about three hours, which, luckily, was all the time I needed to study what I intended to and revi |
I usually study way more, or at least I spend hours doing assignments. I usually study way more, or at least I spend |
However, I've been feeling a lot of eye strain lately, so I thought I'd call it a day. |
I had lunch with my family while we saw Luca, a Disney movie which almost made me cry. |
I enjoyed it a lot and had a good laugh. |
Later in the afternoon, I went to the supermarket with my little brother to buy some chocolate chips to make cookies. |
I love making cookies and chocolate chip cookies are my absolute favorite ones. I love making cookies and chocolate chip cookies are my absolute favorite |
I also watched Friends: The Reunion while having tea, so I naturally had a lot of fun. I also watched Friends: The Reunion while having tea, so |
I never take such long breaks from studying because I consider it a priority and I also like getting good grades, but I enjoyed the long break I took today. |
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