June 1, 2021
第三天
我想我的朋友會説我很善良。我也想他們會説我很喜歡動物和吃東西。我的家會説我很懶但是我的朋友不會説那些話。他們多會説我有一點聰明也一點固執。
I think that my friends will say that I am very kind. I also think that they will say that I really like animals and eating food. My family will say that I'm lazy, but my friends wouldn't say that. Both my friends and family would say that I'm kind of smart and a little stubborn.
我也想覺得他們也會説我很喜歡動物和吃東西美食。
我的家人會説我很懶，但是我的朋友不會説那些話這樣說我。
他們多會説我有一點聰明也一點不過我的家人和朋友應該都會說我聰明又固執。
「有一點聰明」 sounds awkward.
June 5, 2021
謝謝！
Feedback
I am not sure what you want to say. Like, what is the main point for the whole short paragraph?
I read your command in English. But I still don't get it.
I think the important thing is what you want to tell your readers. Or, what do you what to say.
if Iet me know if you have any questions.
June 5, 2021
I'm currently participating in a challenge that gives me prompts. I didn't click on the prompt link so the prompt didn't show up for this journal. Is that the issue or is the issue that what I wrote in Chinese doesn't make sense?
June 7, 2021
I feel worried when I read it. you can add my discord: Lingyi#6079 , So I can explain each sentence to you one by one with a call. that will be more effective.
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第三天 |
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我想我的朋友會説我很善良。 |
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我也想他們會説我很喜歡動物和吃東西。 我 |
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我的家會説我很懶但是我的朋友不會説那些話。 我的家人會説我很懶，但是我的朋友不會 |
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他們多會説我有一點聰明也一點固執。
「有一點聰明」 sounds awkward.
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